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PostPosted: Fri Jun 22, 2007 6:17 pm


Username: Keliptis
First timer (y/n): y
Character's name: Coren Kyla
Creature: Western Dragon
Category: Drake
Elemental type: Shadow, Mind, Space

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Keliptis

Username: Keliptis
Character's name: Coren Kyla
Creature: Western Dragon
Quest Thread: in keeping a nightmare 2nd try historys been redone and the names been altered


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PostPosted: Fri Jun 22, 2007 6:22 pm


Basics


Name: Coren Kyla

Name Meaning: ahaha beats me xD just a name ive always liked

Race: white

Gender: Female

Birthday: March 24, 1987

Age: 20

Hair color: reddish brown

Eye color: Blue

Appearance: slender built shes not built as most runners are. she doesnt let her hair get to long and feels it gets in the way when it does and keeps it about to or above her shoulders. shes always wearing lose clothing normally a white tank top with camo pants. the pockets are usefull for hiding things xd

Height: 5'7

Weight: 135

Born Puyallup Washington

Hometown: Bonny lake, Washington State

Favorite Activities: exploring unknown areas, stareing at treasures shes gotten over there years.

Strengths: the main strength she has is her mind power she seems to always get outta things that cause her issues.

History:

She was born in puyallup washington and raised in a small town named bonny lake, at age 10 one of her brothers (cal) stole a small item from someone, Coren took that as a challenge. At age 13 she was theifing things from all sorts of people, jewelery, candy, books, what ever she wanted at the time. Her parents loved her very much mom (Sally), dad (joe) but they didnt know what to do. At age 14 she was sent to juvenile detention spent a week there, didnt seem to change her much. Age 15 she was stealing stuff from bigger stores, her parents walked in on her in her room one day with a bag of things and decided that was finally it. They chose what they thought was best and sent her to live with another family, relatives of a sort. This only seemed to make her decide she didnt like things more, and didnt seem to stop her from takeing things. She was sent to juvenile detention again at age 16 for a month, getting out and seeming like it never happened. At age 17 she was sent again to jail caught stealling a gold necklace from a walmart store, she was locked up for a full year her previous records catching up to her. She got out at age 18 a bit bitter at her parents and her foster family, and moved out. She was always one to think that there was more to her then most knew about. At age 19 she met her first boy friend who she was with for only 3 months before he cheated on her with another man, this only seemed to anger her more. At age 20 she stole a bunch of things from a elderly gentalman and got her pukka. (see below)

Personality: Quite and to her self shes often if not the one to act the fastest. She couldnt care what others think about her. Some times she can be mean and unexpected actions can take place. Shes got a fedish for anything blue and has a wide collection of things that color. (thats why i chose those colors for her dragon form later on - also listed below) She can be angered easy or event patient some times, even odd with the outcome.

Family: sally (mom), Joe (dad), Cal (brother), Tina (step mom), Mark (step dad)

Parents: sally, joe

Siblings: cal (age 26), Tom (age 17)

Marital Status: single

Schooling: normal highschool, never was one to want to go farther

Job: currently working at subway biggrin fast food yay (and no shiny things for her to take)

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 22, 2007 6:31 pm


How she came here


The Pukka:

Apperance:
pic a small silver jeweled dragonfly on 3 beaded chains connected here and there around her neck. (see the pic biggrin )

why:
She had taken it with a few other things she stole from a elderly man, some reason she loved it so much as to keep it on her at all times. She was alway fasinated with flight, and found dragonflys fun to watch. little did she know what it was going to bring her.
PostPosted: Fri Jun 22, 2007 6:34 pm


Creature of choice: western dragon

Pics:

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Why a dragon?


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In medieval symbolism, dragons were often symbolic of apostasy and treachery, but also of anger and envy, and eventually symbolized great calamity. Several heads were symbolic of decadence and oppression, and also of heresy. They also served as symbols for independence, leadership and strength. Many dragons also represent wisdom; slaying a dragon not only gave access to its treasure hoard, but meant the hero had bested the most cunning of all creatures. In some cultures, especially Chinese, or around the Himalayas, dragons are considered to represent good luck. Dragons are depicted in medieval symbolism to be the size of a bear or smaller. Most dragons posses magical abilities.

The dragon of the modern period is typically depicted as a huge fire-breathing, scaly and horned dinosaur-like creature, with leathery wings, with four legs and a long muscular tail. It is sometimes shown with feathered wings, crests, fiery manes, and various exotic colorations.

and i have a total love of dragons biggrin

Her dragon coloring:

Size: about the size of a large working breed of horse
Eye color: sapphire blue
main body color: a very dark blue almost black
Belly Color: black
Wing Color: underside is a bit lighter then her body color
long whip like tail thats nearly 2 times her length (as in her body)

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somewhat her final form lol (im bad computer colorer)

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 23, 2007 6:34 am


posting is welcome biggrin
PostPosted: Sat Jun 30, 2007 7:12 pm


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PostPosted: Fri Jul 06, 2007 8:42 pm


Right, this is Admin Gallen Storm hence the green. I am going through your idea bit by bit, and I really wanted to address this first. Being a big fan of Japan and anime, and Kurosawa, and those gumball toys that never are painted quite right, I feel that what causes some of what Raur called a cliché is the name of your character. Giving her the name that means goddess of death and then her folks dieing as they did makes it feel like this character is an anime cliché character. Which is fine for an anime, but I feel wont work here. Also her being white makes me have to push to say use a European name, sorry but most Japanese American families as well as Asian American Families usually give there kids western names.

So I say find a new first name.
PostPosted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 6:59 pm


i just like the name amida thats actually what it means :p if its googled but yes i get what was said about it and am currently fixing it

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