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it's been 4ever since I made something, please rate it

Blue-Ultimate

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Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 7:33 am

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I made this in just 5 minutes or so using "paint", I and was thinking maybe I should just change something.

like thiner lines or something, or color some of the lines more.
I would be very grateful with any useful tips. ^+^

Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2007 6:01 pm

could somebody give some advice on how to continue or on what to change >,<

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Posted: Fri Jun 13, 2008 10:55 pm

on paint? really? you've got a really steady hand or mouse lol ..
well you can just continue from there by drawing a neck just one little line on the left from the ear goin down .. extend the line .. add some shoulders .. chest .. arms .. hands .. torso .. waist/crotch-al area .. legs .. feet .. go back to the top nd add detail .. top to bottom several times until you feel its detailed enough .. nd yeah you're doing a pretty good job so far .. hehe oh nd in terms of the line's thickness - its really up to you nd how much detail you'd like to put in it (thicker lines for less detal - thinner lines for more detail) but i think you're doin good with that thickness
-- hope this serves of some use biggrin

Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 1:50 am

Urm...? Out of 5 stars, I'll rate you 3. heart

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Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 11:57 am

Hi there! Like that first person who replied, you must have a steady hand. eek My hand's not that steady. Although, perhaps you're using those line buttons and curved line buttons. That makes sense. Either way, it's still pretty impressive. I think it would help to add thickness on the black lines on the eyes (like the top one) although not too much, but ya know in manga how those lines are kinda thick with those lines and the eyelashes become visible; that's what I'm talking about. Also, maybe a thin line to indicate where the eyelid is or something. And an eyebrow. An eyebrow (or two rofl ) would be nice. Otherwise, I think you're on your way to making a great picture. Also coloring in the eyes and giving in a pupil later might look nice (but you were probably already planning on doing that blaugh ). Oh. And sometimes people like to thicken lines a little when they begin connection to other lines (like when the jawline touches the neckline then those lines would be gradually thicker where they come in contact). You could also do that if you'd like. I don't think you need to ease up on the inking yet. You haven't overly-inked, so that's good. Overall, it's nice. I like it! 3nodding

Although, the hair could flow a little more, but there's not much to help that using paint and a mouse. sweatdrop

Posted: Fri Jul 04, 2008 1:30 am

Movin' on up! rofl Literally. Anyway, good job! Keep at it! You're good at it!

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Posted: Sun Jul 13, 2008 10:17 am

The only problem people haven't addressed is the top of this boy's skull. It is rather flat and could use some pumping up. Other than that, it is a very nice picture. c:
I love his cheerful smile, and I can't wait to see this finished if you plan to.

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