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pfpth

Greedy Prophet

PostPosted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 5:09 pm


((Note: I was making this on my gaia journal when I liked a boy at school, but he couldn't see it, even when I dropped a MILLION hints))

Why?

Why can't you see...
The way I feel inside...
You think I'm still alive...
But inside I'm dying...

I live my life like I normally would...
But even while I walk...
I think of you...
I try to reach to you through my tears...
Why can't you reach back to me..?

You don't seem to notice...
The sadness dwelling in my heart...
Why....
Why can't you see....
The way I feel about you...?
No one cares...
And it's sad and you may ask why...
But I'm still searching for "No One".....

But...
Why...
Do I do this...?

It's because that I'm hoping...

That that "No One"....

Is you.....


"These are the words I speak in my heart about a boy at my school....
It's a special language......
It's called the language of a broken heart..."
~Kat

((Note #2: Also I look at this again and say to myself that it is free-verse, and when in rome, do as the romans do!!!!!!!!..............Or just go along with it and I will never make a rhyming poem in my life. *shifty glances*))
PostPosted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 12:18 pm


I like it.
I, too, have a poem called Why. Well, it's more a song. I put it to music and everything...it's kinda corny and stupid tho...yours is much better!!! >.<

xD

scottsgirl7


pfpth

Greedy Prophet

PostPosted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 1:24 pm


^^ Thank you!
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