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My Fear: Rejection

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Lemon-Lime Merignue

PostPosted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 10:24 am


"Hey, guys, I'm new here and was SO excited when I saw there was a poetry forum! I wrote this awhile back, maybe alot of you won't get it, but try to. Tell me what you think!"



"There is something I want to tell you...but I'm afraid of your reaction..."

I will be tormented until I ask you, but then again, I don't want to know.

If I drop you hints will you pick them up? If I sing my blood will you apply a tourniquet? If I tell you the truth, you will run....

Becasue of you reaction, I am unable to focus. I can't tell you until you tell me. It's mutual for the both of us.

My mind will rot if I don't find out, but my heart would wilt if I knew...

"I'm afraid..."

Fear: Rejection.

For one answer, my fear would come. For one answer, my feet would run. Do you want that?

"If my lips whisper...
'I love you'
...will you accept?"

My Fear: Rejection.
PostPosted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 12:38 pm


I like it. You touched on something that everyone is afraid of, or at least afraid to admit.

Angel Bruja


DoubleTrouble10

PostPosted: Sun Jun 24, 2007 10:18 am


i love it
PostPosted: Sat Jun 30, 2007 9:06 pm


that is really good!

arya241

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