Hello there my names Brock and well....I like to write or come up with stroies and stuff.
Anyway I've been writing for a while I suppose and have alot of seasons for a particular story of mine and......ah you know what lets just for get all this info crap about me for now and get right to it. Basicly this is the first episode of my story and i just want some people to see and tell me what they think.
I had it up once before on another topic but had to take it down due to revision that was nececary.(by the way GR stands for Genetic Revolution)
I also dont mind Constructive Critisism at all but There may be some advice I may not take(such as on change of names or charecters and stuff like that but mabey a few places I might change the name of) but im still willing to hear what you have to say so dont hesitate to post or ask questions if you dont understand some stuff.
Well hope you like it:
Intro
In the year 2010, strange creatures known as Genectics, that were created from world-wide governments’ and biological research corporation’s experiments, have caused mass chaos and destruction in many major continents and countries across the world. The strange creatures were originally around since the year 2002, and have been a real problem, so the Abnormal Hunters Organization (a.k.a., A.H.O) has been set up to neutralize the Genetics and there attacks. Brock, an S rank hunter at A.H.O, and his sister Maia go on missions together to stop the Genetic attacks. The two are renown in and outside of A.H.O as Twin Blade, and have fought genetics off for some time now. They’ve fought with the two rare katana, known as The Shinden which has the summon spirit of lightning known as Murakumo, and the Tsukikage the blade with the summon spirit of water Natsumi. However, when many Genetics suddenly go crazy and are brought together and freed all at a once, a conflict started. It was known as the Genetic Revolution, which is still causing mass destruction and casualties in the city. Its now up to Brock, Maia and other A.H.O. members to find the source of the conflict, confront it, and resolve it.
Episode 1:Revolution Begins
"The Genetic Monsters are everywhere. They’ve already broken through the Defense Sectors 3 and 4. We only have 2 sectors left before they are all gone. We require assistance immediately , there’s nothing but chaos here. They’re killing anyone and destroying anything in there path.......Oh.....No they’re breaking through the.......no......no......don’t ....don......ahhhhhhhh..........................." The screen was shut off with haste when the end of the gruesome footage was shown, and Brock and Maia could only stand in shock after seeing the horrifying recording.
"That’s...that’s....terrible, the genetics have always been bad but never anything like this. Why would they act so crazy all the sudden?" asked Maia. She could feel a weight of grief for all the fellow hunters that had fallen from the Genetics.
"Now you see the damage and destruction they’re causing. It’s bad, real bad, and this was the recording made only an hour ago by one of our Mission Detail Men, and the footage was very difficult to find. We lost eighteen men just trying to recover it," said Commander Conrad of Shinjuku A.H.O Headquarters.
Brock was little surprised and not in as much shock as Maia. He still had his confidence and asked about the mission. "Commander, I see the chaos that the Genetics can cause. I've seen it many times, but please, tell me what is the official mission?" Brock asked unpleasantly.
Commander Conrad had looked at Brock with the utmost of seriousness on his face. "Very well. Your mission is to destroy this:..." Conrad had turned on the screen which showed a strange cocoon-looking object in a type of large canister. It was attached to the canister from the inside, and it seemed to be beating like a heart.
Brock looked at the commander with confusion. "What is it exactly Commander?" Conrad turned around in his chair facing the window and signed to himself “This is the genetic experiment #1536 Code name: Queen. I want you and Maia to go to inner Shinjuku and go to the Government Experimental Laboratory Wataru You must destroy the experiment before it's awakened from its sleep. We fear that if a Genetic at this magnitude is awoken, it will be affected and go crazy like the other Genetics. It can, and will, cause much destruction and many casualties. However, there is one other thing I would like you to do on your way there. That’s to destroy as many other Genetics as possible. I want you to of course save as many of our men and civilians s you can. Understood? Brock and Maia understood there orders perfectly. "Understood Sir" they said simultaneously. So they got their things together, and were ready to commence there mission.
Meanwhile, in inner Shinjuku
"Damn it! They’re everywhere! Where are they all coming from?" A squad of A.H.O. hunters were in the middle of a conflict with a number of berserk Genetics. Unfortunately, the fight was not going well for the hunters. "Damn it! We’ve lost another one. Err...don’t give up men. Don’t let them through. Kill them all! We can win this one, I know it!" The Genetics continued to get closer and closer, until there were only three men left. A man continued to fire his gun at the horde of the genetics, but many of them were unaffected by many types of bullets. In fact, one of the many, and only affective ways to kill the Genetics is to sever them with any type of blade. Gunshots only delayed their movements for so long.
"Haaaaaaaa!" The hunter continued to fire until soon he ran out of bullets and found himself left with no hope. A genetic appeared right in front of him, and it impaled him right through the stomach. The other hunter was decapitated. The commander of the squad was left all alone, fending for himself. He held up his sword, nervously pointing it straight at the Genetics. " St....stay...back you monsters......" the Genetics moved in closer and closer until a furry of Slashes gave way to the spilling of blood all over the ground.
END
Well thats it hope you guy's liked it. If you are a artist and whould like to help me with my manga form of this story then please post on here or pm me and we can work out details.
If you whould like to Critisis(damn i cant spell that right) this story then feel free to, but please dont just attack me and yell and cus and stuff, You can still critisis withouht needing to Very negative as far as just things you say right? So I dont mind critisism , if i did something wrong then please let me know but dont attack or i wont take what you say into consideration.
ok thats it once again i hope you like the first episode, the rest will come as soon as i see that this one is ok. [Note] revision was done by Frousteleous.
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