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 Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2007 11:03 am
I made this last night, spur of the moment thing. It has a story to go with it, although it seems I've lost it. =O
"I feel like a newborn kitten
A kitten with its wings
The wings are slowly moving
The air underneath it changes
The kitten is flown into the air
It soars above the city
It is nightime and all the lights are on
The beauty makes the kitten cry
Kitten can't see
With tears in its eyes
It flies into a building
And falls from the sky
It lands on the ground
It's head has been cracked
There's no way around it
This kitten is dead
The kitten lived a very short life
But it saw the beauty of the world
This little kitten all alone
Had known the true purpose of life
Believe in yourself, because someone else is believing in you."
Comments?
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Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2007 3:44 pm
I like it, it's really cute. heart mrgreen
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Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 7:52 am
Aww, that is a cute poem, and its kinda sad as to what happens to the kitten.
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Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 6:56 pm
Thanks. ^_^
Once I edit it, I'll post the newer version of it on here.
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Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2007 1:32 pm
It's pretty deep.
I like it.
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Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2007 10:23 pm
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Posted: Sat Jun 23, 2007 9:59 am
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Posted: Sun Jun 24, 2007 3:31 pm
Yaay!
Pretty poem
Made me sad inside.
yet so happy.
idk
well Yea.
i like it alot.
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L3ts S3t Th3 Stag3 OnF1re
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