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This is the book im working on from my rp, the creatutes of the night war, i changed it to war of the night for that sounds better, and this is just part of the first draft, so please be not to brutal about how horrible my it is, its just a partvof the first draft, also i suggest you should be at least 13.
Im just putting it here to see if i should even finish it, i mean is it ok, and what should i add or remove
note, nicole and hauki are the same person, i thnk i fixed that but i mightve missed a few, just to tell you
War of the Night
By: Jacob Keller



Preface

Creatures of the night, vampires, demons, lycans, and more stalk the night searching for other creatures to slay or humans to feed upon. They live in our simple towns or our great big cities, silently hunting in the shadows and the roof tops, ready to kill anyone or anything. They hunt during the night and sleep in the day in there basements, caves, coffins, graves, and anywhere to get out of the sun. They use to stay out of visibility of us and use to hunt quietly, not anymore, the creatures of the night are ready to reveal themselves and show the humans who are the leaders of this pathetic world, but some creatures don’t want to come out, and some want to destroy every other creature in the world, and the humans who do know about the war have even started there own clan. The four clans known as the Red Rose, the fangs of death, the red eye the human life. This war has been going on for over twenty years and there is no sign of a clan winning. There is one man that may have a chance to stop the war from going in the wrong way, a vampire known as Dread; he is the leader of the red rose clan, the clan that is trying to stop the others from showing us to the humans fully. He is a scientist and has discovered a disease that might change the whole war completely. He may be the only hope for the end of the war. A necromancer has suddenly appeared in the city of New York, changing this whole damn war, strengthening some sides and weakening the others….



Chapter 1. The lycan


Dread, a simple vampire, looks like any other one but he isn’t he is the leader of the red rose, the clan that will stop the others from showing themselves fully to the humans making us the leaders of the world. He has red and orange hair that covers his face somewhat, his eyes are a greenish bluish color and he has a simple oval face. In bars and in public he wears a black suit but at night when he goes hunting in the city he wears a dark cloak, red shirt, and blue jeans. He carries around in public his trusty two knives he calls dren and ren and a bottle of poison that can knock out a werewolf in a second. But in private when hunting creatures he carries the most impressive scimitar ever that he calls menical, it is a large five foot scimitar that’s pretty rugged and the most curios thing about the sword is that it is green, a rare metal, so rare that there is only enough for two swords. He grew up in a city now known as Springfield today but back then it was known as Deatsville, he then grew up to be a scientist in diseases and cures but on his way home he was bitten since then he has been searching for a cure. Now he lives in New York city, where all the other clans are.
The clans base is in a simple bar known as, what else, the red rose. It’s a bar like any other but in the basement is the feeding area and the room upstairs is where they all meet.
Dread was hunting creatures for samples for his science studies when he bumped into a girl he knew for many years known as Nicole Pranger, she was a 25 year old girl who he personally taught how to fight and some elemental magic, he met up with her when he saved her from some lycans looking for an easy meal, they tore her parents up and were about to eat her when dread saw the blood and bones on the floor in the alley, he jumped down in the lycans path and cut there heads off that fell on the floor with there bodies, dread cleaned up the alley a bit to look like an accident but couldn’t find the girl, she was in a dumpster crying, he took her to the clan and took good care of her , she was scared a lot because of the creatures in the clan, hiding in her room most of the time, for over 5 months, she one day came out and accepted them.
“Oh, dread, you scared me a bit,” nicole said turning around, “He-he, do that a lot, you know, being a vampire does that, so what you doing in this part of town?” Dread said, “Oh just looking for ingredients for some sweets, and what are you doing here,” nicole said looking into her bag, “oh the usual, hunting creatures of the night, and sweets ehh, what kind of sweets?” Dread said trying to look in the bag, nicole swipes the bag out of his view and says, “Some chocolate, green tea, sugar, and some other things, but I’m not going tell you what I’m making, neeahhh” She said while making a raspberry. “Hehe, always acting like two…… ummm I have to go nicole, business….” Dread said while noticing a huge shadow jumping from building to building. Dread jumped to the side of a building jumping to the next building and so on till he got to the top. “And your always leaving in a middle of a conversation,” nicole said while walking to a crafts store, for she loved to draw and create stuff, everyone knew it in her clan, and she wasn’t ashamed of it. Meanwhile dread was hiding behind some items on the roofs of the buildings, trying to stay out of the view of the shadow which turned out to be a werewolf, one that dread never had seen, the lycan jumped from the ledge of this building to the next, 45 feet, surprisingly far even for a werewolf, dread on his way to the edge of the building tripped, alarming the werewolf, the werewolf turned behind and looked around, seeing nothing sniffs the air and smells something. Dread was hiding behind a ventilation shaft that was near were he tripped, praying to god that the werewolf wouldn’t see him, the lycan was about to turn his head behind the ventilation shaft when he heard the tinkling of a bell on a store door, he jumped off the building into the ally near the store. Dread got up and noticed that the store that the werewolf hid behind was the one that Nicole went into and was leaving out of now, “See you Mr. Johnson” Nicole said while leaving the store, “See you later nicole, be careful now, “ the store manager said. nicole was walking down the sidewalk and went near the alley near the sore and she heard a growl, “Dread….. is that you?” she said while looking into the alley, she walked into the ally looking for dread, “ Oh I see that dread is being so smart tonight...not… So what can I help you with?” She said seeing the lycan, and knowing that she had a diamond tether hair tie in her hair, that she knew was unbreakable. The Lycan jumped at her with his claws, ready to rip her limbs off her when dread jumped down and blocked the werewolf’s claws with menical; sparks flew everywhere, the lycan jumped back, ready to attack again, “I see your making new friends Nicole” Dread said striking the lycan in the side, the lycan howled in pain, blood dripping from the wound, covering it the lycan goes back a few more steps, angry, wanting to rip his eyes out for that. “Dread I can handle this, also he’s not from a clan, he has no symbol of any of the clans on him,” She said while putting her bags down. “Huh, just noticed that myself, anyways I’ll………” Dread said to Nicole when the lycan struck the side of his face with his claws, scratching his cheek, opening it up, blood gushing through his mouth, choking him a bit throwing him through the alley and the street right into a brick wall of a store, going in and out of consciousness, finally everything went black, “s**t you ******** son of a gun, what is your problem,” Nicole said while getting her hair tie ready to strike, the lycan jumped at her ready to tear her apart when the moon was blocked by some clouds, the lycan dropped from the air and hit the ground, turning back to normal revealing his human form, a form that was very familiar to nicole, “Father!!!!!!!!!!” nicole yelled, “Run…. Before it’s to late…. nicole, tell Dread that I can’t control my body, and not to hold back when you tell him about me…… the nec……” nicoles father was about to say something when the clouds moved away from the moon and her father started to change back, The man stood back up, his legs started to change, making him taller, he started to grow hair, his nose became larger and became a huge muzzle full of teeth ready to tear apart flesh, his claws came out, about 7 inches long. He lunged at nicole, snapping at her skull, she dodged it and snapped her hair tie at his wound, the lycan howled and fled. nicole ran through the street, dodging cars and pedestrians. She made it to dread and called a cab, a cab stopped and inside a man saw that she was trying to move dread, but with no results, he got out to help her, while picking him up he noticed the sword, “So what happened??” asked the cab driver putting dread into the cab, “We were rehearsing for a play and well my friend here had 1 tequila, 2 tequila, 3 tequila, floor,” She said to the cab driver trying to wake dread up, “Ok…….. so were do you want to go?” the cab driver said while getting in the driver part of the cab, “ The Red rose, its down by 62nd street on Mary Rose avenue,” she said while waving some chocolate around dreads nose knowing that chocolate is dreads favorite and can smell it a mile away. “The Red Rose?? That’s a bar; you want to get your friend here even drunker than he already is??” The cab driver said while pulling out of the curb, “Some of his friends are there now and they know what to do,” she said slapping dreads face, “ok then……” the cab driver said while driving. Nicole finally gave up trying to wake dread up and looked outside of the window, noticing a shadow following the cab by jumping from building to building. “Oh s**t, this is not good at all….” She said sounding a little worried, “Huh, what is it mam?” the cab driver said while turning on a street corner, “Oh its nothing to big,” Nicole said while looking at side, the shadow stopped and roared as if in pain, it fled back in another direction, “ what is going on around here…..” she said in a barely audible voice.


Chapter 2. The Necromancer



They got to the bar, the cab driver helped to get dread inside and rested him on a bar stool, “Man this night is weird,” the cab driver said, trying to dodge teens dancing, “Sorry about this, how much do I owe you”, Nicole said getting into her purse, “One hundred forty two dollars and 27 cents,” The cab driver said while trying to get a girl to get off of him, “Ok…. Here you go and some for helping me get dread in here and a tip, thanks,” Nicole said while handing him two hundred dollars, “Two hundred, wow, you must be rich,” the cab driver said while putting it away,” He-he, a bit, anyways I have to go, bye,” nicole said while going running to the stairs, dodging teens, drunks, and college students on the way to the stairs.
She got to the stairs and ran up; got to the door and got her key out, unlocked the door and she went in, “Daniel!!! I need your help,” nicole yelled, “What is it now??” a guy walking through some doors to her right, covered in grease, wiping off oil on his hands with a rag. He was a six foot three guy, was black and had short black hair; he usually wears jean overalls that are stained in grease and has a green shirt on beneath the overalls. Daniel was the Red Roses mechanic, and he was a great artist, almost as good as nicole. He acted tough a lot but inside he was a joker, and a very smart guy. He is a werewolf, but the reason he isn’t a lycan form now is because dread created a serum that made it so he can go werewolf anytime he wanted to at night and could turn back at any time.
“Dread is knocked out on a bar stool, and I need some help moving him up here,” Hauki said to Daniel, “Had one to many beers?” Daniel said jokingly, “ha-ha, no a lycan hit him in the head knocking him to a wall,” Hauki said crossing her arm, “ oh, lets go then!” Daniel said while walking to the door, Hauki followed him, they made it downstairs. Dodging teens, drunks, and college students, finally getting to the filthy bar stool dread was sleeping on. They picked him up but dropped him when some kid bumped into them, “ Sorry bout that guys, I’m having to much fun and lost control a bit,” the kid said while getting up and wiping himself off, “no problem, we need to get our drunk friend upstairs though, so see ya,” Hauki said while getting dread back up, “ sure, hehe, back to the party, “ the kid said walking back into the crowd, “ strange kid, never want one, and cant, darn you curse of mother nature!!!!” Daniel said picking up dread,” Daniel, just get him in the room and you can go back to fixing the vehicle,” Hauki said while shaking her head.
“I’m sure this is he right place boss, I saw the girl and the lyck, carrying dread,” the kid said into his headset, “good, its time to begin the transference of him, make sure they get to that cemetery,” the guy talking back into the headset said, “ will do, but first, a meal,” said the kid licking his lips.
A couple of hours later dread finally woke up, slowly. He saw things blurry, he slowly got up moaning, “ ohhhhhhh, never get hit in the head by a lycan, do you have any Tylenol or aspirin with you?” moaned dread rubbing his neck. “ about time sleepy head, here take these and the water, and when you feel like eating I made some chocolate supreme coco melt icecream.,” Nicole said while handing him the Tylenol and water, “hehe, im hungry now,” dread said while taking down the Tylenol an gulping the water, “ yes but that will spoil ur dinner, of meatloaf,” Nicole said sitting down in the couch next to him, “ meatloaf!?!?!?! Blech, I hate that stuff,” dread said sticking his tongue out as in a puking motion, “ hey guys, your not gonna believe this,” sheen said whle unning into the living room, turning on the tv,
Now sheen is a demon, a pretty gib one to, about 7 feet tall, and he actually looks like hellboy, but with the horns, but his voice is a bit higher than his. And for those of you that don’t know what hellboy is, hes a big red dude, has hair only around hishead, like a monk, has horns in his bald spot.
“whats this about sheen?” dread said lying back down, watching the tv, shen turned to the news cahnnel and turned it up, “ Last night a grave was robbed, leaving only 1 body, a witness saw the culprit last night.” The news girl said through the microphone.

its a rough draft, part of a rough draft so it will have errrors,
and that character descriptinis a good hint