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 Posted: Tue Dec 25, 2007 10:12 am
Any fanfic where after Bella is turned she can :A) bluxh, B) sleep, C) is still clumsy, D) has random things like tattoos, bad grammar, or still has brown eyes. Any where Edward A) talks like and idiot, or B) gets Bella pregnant also irritate me (except sillybella's fanfic where she become pregnant and can sleep. that cracks me up). The ones where the canon pairings are messed with bug me, too.
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Posted: Wed Dec 26, 2007 10:59 pm
(...what's an OOC?)
o also i really hate it when the fanfics go 20 years into the future or 10 years....it messes me up really bad.
as for the whole paragraphs thing and changing thing, I try not to use big paragraphs...i try to be just like Stephenie. Also, i attempted to do a fanfic where Bella gets changed...i'm not sure how it turned out (and u may notice that the plot gets rushed at one point...sry) so could u guys let me know what u think? its here in the subforum. 4laugh
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Posted: Sun Dec 30, 2007 8:04 pm
OOC means out of character at any range, whether it means that Alice is acting a little strange for her character, or maybe some male Cullen....PG-13 scenes ; O
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Posted: Sun Dec 30, 2007 9:03 pm
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Posted: Sat Jan 19, 2008 2:25 pm
i haven't read much fanfiction, but from what i've read i've found a couple of flaws that i can not stand in the least:
1) Bella is coherrant through her changing: she's supposed to be writhing in pain the WHOLE time evil
2) The names of the characters are the same, but the story is completely different, with the writer in Bella's place - YUCK
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Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 9:15 am
Number one turnoff for me:
Bad grammar. xD Seriously. It annoys me to no end when I see stories that do not have the proper punctuation. I can take it to a point, but so many stories just drive me over the limit. Also the whole 'Super vampire Bella' stories, where she can blush, shape shift, etc..
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Posted: Fri Jul 04, 2008 7:58 pm
ok i do have one question: what's a oneshot? I see it ALL THE TIME, and i have no idea what it means...
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Posted: Tue Jul 08, 2008 8:38 pm
lildarkangel3001 ok i do have one question: what's a oneshot? I see it ALL THE TIME, and i have no idea what it means...
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Posted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 5:48 pm
Syrette lildarkangel3001 ok i do have one question: what's a oneshot? I see it ALL THE TIME, and i have no idea what it means... o..thanks!
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Posted: Thu Dec 04, 2008 11:31 am
lildarkangel3001 Syrette lildarkangel3001 ok i do have one question: what's a oneshot? I see it ALL THE TIME, and i have no idea what it means... o..thanks! Ooooh....that's what a oneshot is? I thought it was something else...and I'd rather not say what I thought it meant. sweatdrop whee xp
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