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 Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2007 10:17 pm
I dont usually make love songs but ima give it a try
heres the first verse i jus finished Writing
All i wanna say is girl,You amaze me
your looks,Body and personality seem to daze me
Never in my life have i seen a girl like you
You jus seem so right, like 1 + 1 = 2
But you aint a 2,Your a certified 10
you keep poppin in my head,over and over again
You have the most beautiful smile,And the most beautiful eyez
my homies think when i talk about you,I sensationalize
Your skin is so soft,And babygirl i love your boooty
come on and put it on me,I dont mind gettin cooties
Ill Tap tap that a**,And pulverize tha p***y
you'll see,that Bizzy that kiidd,Is far from a rookie
You seem to good to be true,My eyes start gleamin
Im startin to think like young jeezy,I jus gotta be dreamin
But i aint,I could jus tell your real by your walk
Babygirl,You turn me on jus by the way that you talk, (ON THA REAL)
There it is tell me what ya think, ima probably record it soon when im done writing it.
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Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2007 10:39 pm
...You're simpin now?
cry
There goes another soldier.
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Jaiden Stryker Vice Captain
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Jaiden Stryker Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2007 11:13 pm
I'm not into love songs... at all. Sometimes I make an exception for oldies, but not too much.
But as a song, it's not bad.
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Posted: Tue Jun 05, 2007 11:32 pm
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Posted: Wed Jun 06, 2007 1:15 am
What's wrong with rapping what you feel? neutral
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Posted: Wed Jun 06, 2007 3:35 am
You can rap but never forgetthat youre a ******** soldia// and you dont need nothing but guns and weapons to indulge ya.// Youre a sweeper with your guns drawn// youre the reaper 'bout to shoot some *****'s balls off// youre creepin' pistol in your palm.// street sweeper 
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Posted: Wed Jun 06, 2007 1:04 pm
Ey i aint soft or nuthin i jus said ima rap about a girl
n thats what i came up with
is it atleast DECENT?
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Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2007 8:28 pm
its kinda corny. expecially that 1+1 line.
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Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2007 5:47 am
BiZZY THA KiiDD Ey i aint soft or nuthin i jus said ima rap about a girl n thats what i came up with is it atleast DECENT? Dont worry wat they said..Love is beautiful and I should Know..
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