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 Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2007 5:57 pm
Heaven was once my paradise.
Now hell is my province.
My golden wings have faded,
My joyfull spirit,
stolen.
Satan takes my hand,
God releases me.
My soul is shattered.
My heart is torn.
I can no longer watch earth from above,
Now I can only cry,
I cry in this pitiful darkness,
My tears fall on earth as rain drops,
I hope they all taste my bitter tears.
My tears,
The tears of a fallen angel.
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2007 2:54 pm
Oh... *sniff* crying So sad... how ever did you write something like this? It's so beautiful, yet so heart-rendingly sorrowful at the same time. *sigh* I wish I had that kind of talent. All my poems end up all happy and ushy-gushy-lovey stuffness.
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Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2007 12:54 pm
i loved it. i was sorta like my poem with the same title you are very talented
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Posted: Fri Sep 07, 2007 9:12 pm
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Posted: Sat Sep 08, 2007 11:12 am
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Posted: Tue Sep 18, 2007 2:34 pm
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