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 Posted: Thu Jun 28, 2007 10:23 am
This isn't even a poem. This is a choppy narrative of something thta happened in a span of five minutes one day.
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Posted: Thu Jun 28, 2007 10:24 am
EmoDork93 I don't really CARE if it's not a poem. I did everything I wrote in there. And Your wrong. LOTS of people in write poety. They just dont want to show. Oh..one question. WHY do you think it's not poetry?
Also, it doesn't matter whether or not you did everything in there. That doesn't make the poem any better.
Also, arm warmers make me sad.
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