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Suicide NoeT

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PostPosted: Thu May 31, 2007 7:09 am


Dad, Please here me out

As soft winds sweep away the days
I look back on the part of life through a haze.
Remember playgrounds, parks and friends,
In childlike gaze that never ends.
The laughter in a game of catch,
Shall memory ever attach...
To innocence in youthful eyes,
Catching the ball to Dad's surprise.

I recall my first bike, first wreck,
Who picked me up, said, "What the heck?"
Convinced me to give one more try,
While, knees skinned, I forgot to cry.
Just the joy knowing he was there,
Making him proud my only care.
There was nothing I couldn't do,
My heart held fast that to be true.

Though the years were kind of rough,
I sure wasn't too big or tough.
You taught me to defend what's right
And never back down from a fight.
So I learned the hard way to stand,
Still, with each lump, I found your hand.
Drawing from you an inner strength,
And stubborn pride of equal length.

But there the line of fate was drawn,
As though I blinked and you were gone.
I found myself facing the sun,
Not girl, but fatherless, one.
Eyes blinded by a void inside,
I could not believe that you had died.
Alas finding it to be true,
I couldn't do anything without you.

Please, Dad, today just hear my call,
I'm sorry that I dropped the ball.
My life is wrecked, my knees are skinned,
My emotions undisciplined.
I can't get up although I try,
Please don't be upset if I cry.
Though I can't fight what I can't see,
Please, Dad, say you're still proud of me.  
PostPosted: Wed Jun 27, 2007 1:00 pm


crying thats was really good im actually in tears right crying

your poem really cut me deep because my dad is gone too but hes not dead but he might as well be

im sorry for you loss deepest sympathy

UchiHime


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PostPosted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 9:27 am


thanx but my dads alive and doing well...this was a poem I wrote saying as if I lost him..because for a while there I did..not physivcaly but mentaly he left me life...as he begain to relise he was loosing his daughter he did what he needed to fix it..But I'm glad you thought of him being dead..it kinda was the whole purpose of it...he died in my life for a while...
PostPosted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 9:31 am


Reality

Death, departure, walk away, walk out
Should I or should I not pout

Family and friends
"Love" and the all the ends

I thought I loved, but I realy lost and lived
How do I trust, how do I love again

I should move on, it's all in my past
But my pain remains, continues and lasts

This pain lingers in my heart, mind and soul
Damn it - why is this world so cold

How can I have faith in God and family
When people I love are taken from me

Where can I find true and loyal friends
I'm sick of the lies, fights and revenge

Hurt continuously, hurt at a young age
How do I love again with all of my rage

How do I get past all of this, show me a sign
So I can leave my sadness, pains, and crying behind.
 

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 4:10 pm


I realy like your first poem, as sad as it was it was beautiful.
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