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 Posted: Tue May 22, 2007 1:31 pm
mostly gaia avatars, 'cept for the first one.
i think i'm slowly getting better at cging, but i still hate backgrounds and clothes gonk
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Posted: Tue May 22, 2007 4:27 pm
maybe its just me but the faces on all of them look a little long
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Posted: Tue May 22, 2007 8:13 pm
That one eye (one on our left) on the second picture reaally bothers me. D:
Otherwise, nice stuff. I wouldn't mind seeing a bit more highlighting/shadows in the hair.
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Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 9:53 am
you seem to have problems with symmetry
one eye higher than the other, mouth off center, differently sized boobs
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Dr. Valentine Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 1:28 pm
Everything looks like it's made of latex except the white fabric depicted in the top illustration. It's passable as an amateur but if you want to get serious about CG, I'd consider trying to color things as the texture they actually are and not *just* coloring them in a way that looks "okay".
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Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 4:06 pm
Add some width variation to those lines.
Right now they remind me of the crappy art that gets stuck in history textbooks. -shudder-
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