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Does anyone want to read and comment on my Pred fanfic?

I began writing a predator story on fanfiction, and so far i have some promising feedback.
I'd love yours too!
Read the story

Thankyou! It's time consuming, but I'm trying! Inspiration is the hugest headache when trying to expand the story, and I want to tred carefully. So many stories out there make me laugh, because the human heros/herines of the story almost always over power the preds in some way. When you think about it, that just wouldn't happen, and you'd have to be pretty darn lucky to stand side by side with any pred, so I'm trying to be more true to the pred species, and not take inspiration from other fanfics...
Goodness I just go on and on...lol rolleyes

My stories go on for a long time without updates, but no body seems to mind. It's a good outlet for me.

I work in word, saving constantly and at first it's just a mess of ideas, inspirations and notes. Then I just start to form a first chapter from those snippets, and when I come to a point where a second chapter would fall into place I split the story up. I then just keep going, heading back to the start after about 3 or 4 chapters to correct any mistakes or change and add sections that need more work. I then put one chapter up while I work on more, that way I'm always one step ahead and can change the story easier as I go, with people reviewing and helping me in the process. Which is what I'm hoping for here. But I'm glad you like my story so far.

On a side note I just noted a few bits I want to change to the second chapter, so I'm about to update it in ten or so mins. 4laugh

I guess it was good

Man, I love the story. biggrin I only read the first chapter thus far, but I liked it a lot. Your character is believable. She wasn't like a god where she was too good to get hurt. I like that.