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Posted: Sat May 19, 2007 12:24 pm
Sweet Thing And Clockwork Sorrow Quest
Welcome to Ann's very first quest thread ever, this is both for my sweet thing and a clockwork sorrow. I’ll accept whatever comes my way, raffle or flatesale, but if I can actually get my hands on a custom x.x Ima go ahead and get one. Only critics to help me improve on my sweet thing and clockwork sorrow.
I am not asking for donations, but they are always loved even when they are unexpected. Don’t forget to critic, I love those.
For those who haven’t noticed, my title is a mix of my sweet thing and my clockwork sorrow ideas <3
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Posted: Sat May 19, 2007 12:56 pm
Sweet Thing Information
Sweet Thing Name: Okichi Gender: Female Flavor: Yokan pear and caramel Colors: Caramelaranja Physical description for each stage:
Arrival Stage -> The box should be a caramel color with a beige dotted outline, she shouldn't be to big, more of a regtangle then a square. [x]
First Stage -> The trunk should now have reversed colors, how it happened is still unknown.
Second Stage -> I'd like her to have amber eyes and a simple white child kimono. She shouldn't be pale yet. Her hair should be black and really long going to about the small of her back
Third Stage -> Her hair should be down to her ankles and her kimono has turned a beige color. Nothing is really different apart from the fact she has started to try some geisha make up.
Fourth Stage -> In her teen years, Okichi has decided to cut her hair and place it into the usual Maiko hair do. She refuses to wear the white face make up still and her kimono has changed drastically. Here you can see the Shoes and back of the kimono she is wearing. Her kimono should have that red collar that shows she is a maiko. At this stage her kimono colors should be a caramel color.
Fifth Stage -> She now paints her face all white and truly resembles a Geisha. Her Kimono is now a green to symbolise her pear side.
Personality: Okichi is an oddity. She has random mood swings and an inconveniently careless attitude about anything and everything. She works with a smile, efficiently. On the other side, she can be very much like a spoiled child when things don't go her way. At times she acts her shoe size, not her age, making her an official drama queen. Thinking she is one of a kind in the world, she is used to doing as she pleases and not completely follows authority. Though she is impudent, she always gets what is asked of her done. She dislikes loud, slow, or obnoxious people. She talks very much and is generally disgusted by pretty much anyone who doesn’t ‘dress to impress’ as she does. Custom Cert?: No Extra notes: Might be repeating myself, but I want her to grow into the Geisha part, not look like one when she’s born. Here are a few things on Geisha.Info On Sweet Yokan is a thick jellied dessert made of red bean paste, agar, and sugar. It is usually sold in a block form.Why I Picked A Yokan Well first off because they are really good, but also because I had been doing a project on Japanese confetti and the Yokan seemed pretty interesting considering its ingredients, which is why in the first place I went to buy one and taste it for myself. Also these treats were popular back when the Geisha were abundant, thus why I wanted her to look like one.
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Posted: Sat May 19, 2007 12:57 pm
Clockwork Sorrow
Clockwork Sorrow Name: Cár'neyá { Meaning: Slaughterhouse in Styrásh } Gender: Female Word Essence: Selfish secrets Manifest Emotion: Depressed Stages: 1 Colors: Dark sunset colors. So dark purples, dark blues, park pinks, dark oranges. Physical description for each stage: I’d like her hair to be long and wavy, black on top and white underneath. Deep purple eyes, pale, but not sickly. Here are sample dresses, have fun making one finally one out of these. Sample dress Sample dress 2 RP sample: Another white night, another party, more fake smiles, this was really getting to Thalia’s moral. Her master truly treated her like some hanging piñata that anyone could take a swing at if they liked, she had had enough. Jennifer came in cutting off Thai’s train of thoughts carrying yet another silk dress for her mistress, Thalia stole a side ways glance to her messy closet already full with dresses and shoes and other things her master thought was fit for her to wear. He was such a control freak when it came down to little details such as these, then again he always made sure every detail of what Thalia looked liked was picture perfect for his parties. She glanced back to the maid who was now awaiting instructions so she could help with the dress, Thai’s hand gesture came automatically as she dismissed the maid rather rudely. The maid gave no sign of fuse and left quietly shutting the door behind her, Jennifer knew when her mistress was in a moody temperament, she’d be called again later on to help with the corset anyways. Thalia turned her attention to the dress pieces laid out on the bed, she cringed at the sight of the corset and rolled her eyes at the expensive jewellery her master had bought, she needed nothing of the sort. The corset looked particular today, it was a leaf green with a magnificent black floral design over it, the bottom of the dress was a multitude of layers upon layers of black and green creating a very eye attracting pattern. A small green jacket with tight sleeves was also added, this would be hard to move in. A loose necklace was added with an emerald gem and her earrings held a similar stone. Jennifer was called in once more.
Thalia always thought corset were things from the devil, masters didn’t like people looking at their slaves yet corset pushed their chests up and gave them such nice curves it was no wonder why so many men got their bits and pieces shop off daily for staring to long. Her strawberry blond hair was mostly left down, two strands left in the front and Jennifer had bunched some at the back, added a white flower and did her make up. Thai’s master came in minutes after she was dressed and ready, Thalia bowed as was to be done and faked a smile.
“You look extravagant Milady” He took her extended hand she had offered and tucked her under his arm walking out of the room. The party commenced and all went well, once again she was presented to everyone. She would not be doing much tonight for she was not in her usual performing clothing, instead it seemed these where to restrict any movement at all. After the incident of a few nights ago she wasn’t surprised by this at all, entertaining was her life and her master had all but slyly under handed her and slowly had stopped her from doing anything but stay at his side. She was just for show now, and it irritated her to know she was now just a random object to show off. When he left her side she’d pass remarks about her master, no one dared complain, for they knew who ruled the house now and everyone knew the master could barely live without a bloated head full of pride, not after all the attention she had gotten him in a short period of time.
The night her master left her side, she left to go back to her room; she would take such acts no more. The left cheek of her face held a red mark, he had finally hit her in front of everyone and she had left the ball crying. She was packing her things now, stuffing clothing and jewellery in a bundle in many suitcases. Then the door slammed open and in came her master, Thalia froze on the spot. He seemed confused and grabbed a servant by the collar asking him if he had truly seen Thailia enter her bed chamber, the servant boy answered yes, he was scared out of his wits and ran as soon as the master dropped him back to the floor. Thalia’s master looked around again, frowned and slammed the door shut, she released a heavy breath. She herself was confused, had he not seen her standing in the middle of the room with her hands with a bunch of dresses and shoes?? Seemed not, she continued with a big smile on her face.
That night her escape had all been to easy, she had grabbed two horses, a cart and left the castle without anybody noticing. She would be selling most of her things at the village market for some good money, then be on her way and live off of that. Life seemed almost normal for once. Although it would be odd for someone that looked such as herself to be selling such expensive clothing, it would seen to suspicious and by the time her master noticed she wasn’t even in his manor it would be all, but to late and she wouldn’t even be out of the village before someone came to stop her and bring her back to her rightful owner. She’d have to find someone who was willing to help her. Extra notes: Nu not really, just don’t make her look sad. >.>
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Posted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 4:44 pm
Guardian
Name: Aliena Bella Hamleigh Gender: Female Family: Father- Jason Hamleigh Mother- Unknown Devoted to: Unmarried Progeny: No children Profession: Professional dressage athlete and dressage teacher.
Species: ½ Human ½ Succubus Age: 21 Height: 5'6" Weight: 130-134 lbs Hair: Lenght- A little past her shoulders Color- Strawberry red somewhat Style- Wavy, sometimes in a ponytail Eyes: Color- Ice blue Shape- Angular with a twist of a mysterious and a flirtatious look
Piercings/Other Modifications: Both ears pierced twice. A tattoo of a black Pegasus on the bottom of her back.
Alternate form: Small demon horns, a tail with a spaded tip and dragonlike wings. Abilities { Magical }: Change forms from human to Succubus. Feed off male souls
Make up/Accessories: Typically wears a couple rings, two on her left hand and one on the other. On her left hand the middle finger is left without a ring and on the right it’s the middle finger who has the ring. As for make up, eyeliner, bit of lip stick, sometimes eye shadow. She wears a tight necklace, just loose enough to not make it look like a choker.
Personality: A bit on the loud side, observant, somewhat cynical and kind of a flirt to most people, but inwardly she's very kind hearted, generous, and protective of those she really cares for. Her sarcastic words only come from her past experience in high school when boys were chasing her around for her large chest. Those friendlier aspects of her personality come out when one really gets to know her. If someone is fortunate enough to truly gain her trust and respect, she will be loyal to a fierce extent. She used to be very outwardly emotional, but that emotion is no longer shown much around other people. Ally learned to suppress feelings better, and is now the type who'd rather cry out of sadness or frustration in the safety and privacy of her own room where no one will see her. She just doesn't want to show that sort of weakness or vulnerability around people. Aliena remembers her past quite clearly and will usually act upon instincts, succubus instincts drilled into her when younger.
Likes: Riding, Teaching, Reading, Horses, Cats, Camping, Hot milk, Laying in tall grass, The voice someone makes when they have a cold, Drawing
Dislikes: Cold, Messiness, People who are over dramatic, Storms, People who think they are the center of the world, Electronics, Meat, Dogs, Anything war related
Issue{s}: Aliena has a lot of deep rooted issues she tried to hide behind a smile. Younger, she was separated from her father by her mother who wanted her to truly embrace her Succubus side, although she was returned to her father who gave her at home education of a mortal. This cause certain problems for having lived with her mother practically 16 years of her life and now going and living on her with her mortal father issues pressure on her.
Stress is another issue she has, living with a magical tree and trying to teach mortal children how to ride has driven her almost insane (Mostly the tree). She also thinks she is leading a double life because of what she half is, thus confusing her and driving her a tad bit over the insane line at times.
 *Note* This guardien is both for the sweet thing and the clockwork sorrow
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Posted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 5:17 pm
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Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2007 6:19 pm
No critics? I really need them to improve!
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