Tumblekax
I love it. I love it. I love how it ends. I didn't like the beginning until i read the end. I realized that to love it, I personally couldn't treat it as a fic, i had to treat it as an interpretation of the song Contact. I love the part about roger and mimi at the end. I love the smashed camera. You have some strong images in there. Your voice from mark's perspective is very strong. I can see that it is mark, it reminds me of the way Anthony Rapp portrays playing the character in his book. Sorry to be rambling like this, I just like to talk over things I read in this random way. Anyway, I really see "contact" as a sex scene, not a scene in a club, so that seemed off to me, your way works, but it dulls it down a bit. I've always wondered what the hell mark is doing in "contact" he refers back to it later, but who is he with??? back to topic, it's beautiful. If you end up editing it, pm me, I'd love to read what you change. Nice work.
Thank you for reading this, and for your very high praise!
heart I always saw Contact as a dream sequence, especially because it's portrayed as one in the original script. I always thought that Mark would participate in this sequence, because even though he isn't with anyone, he's still a sexual being.
I might edit it but I'm not sure how. I'll let you know! thanks again!
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