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The Forest Of Creation (My first poem from years ago)

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Halo Rising

PostPosted: Sun May 13, 2007 10:27 pm


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I have walked in the forest of creation.
And I have seen the birds,the animals,and the trees.
I stood and wondered how long that would be.
I looked all around me and saw the chipmunks among the leaves.
And I heard the whisper of Autumn in the breeze.


Then I knew that this will not be.
For i've seen Man destroy even greater things than this...
Now I know that this fleeting place will not be free.
The destruction will come as gently as a kiss...


We are blind! We are blind!
For we cannot see the beauty of
the birds,the animals,and the trees!
But if we don't let imagination die...
This poem will not have been written in vain.


Written By: Halo_Rising
PostPosted: Mon May 21, 2007 1:53 pm


nice job

scottyluvsme


G-KnightFall

Dangerous Shapeshifter

PostPosted: Tue Jun 26, 2007 9:31 pm


Nice!
PostPosted: Tue Jun 26, 2007 9:59 pm


real good, like it alot biggrin

jezhicka


lovely-problems

PostPosted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 11:35 am


It has an awkward beat near the end, but that only makes it cooler. >.<
PostPosted: Fri Mar 14, 2008 8:46 pm


Ack! Double negatives!!!!

MoDeStTrUtH

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