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Aight lets take it from the top, I will start with Teezy's first two lines

The word Psalm and Tom can rhyme just ******** right if you slur it at the slightest. And just by reading the lines it shows how much meaning can be packed into two small lines by the bolding itself.

Ok Jaiden's first two

first line, plain as a bag of lays. and the second damn line is just self incriminating. you are dissing a man for trying to make his lyrics understandable to his crowd while you simply bold your rhymes which is ******** whack, because when i see bold i am looking some wordplay or some kind of damn substance. Teezy went straight into it, he said you can find his lyrics in Psalms and then explained why. Jaiden's second line leads to believe that he doesnt understand the s**t, and therefore is dissing his own incompetence. And overlookable and detectable, is bullshit. I give a ******** whether it rhymes or not, it just made s**t weaker anyway because even though you like strife a lot it shows your how vast your vocabulary is.

Aight Teezy's 3rd and 4th line

He EXPLAINS the mystery of the first line. Which isnt required, but hey who explains their lines within the verse. Thats ******** original. Theses two lines werent anything too shabby but they still managed to out class what jaiden threw at him. These two lines were just point blank and simple. They were a topic sentence. Personally I hate myspace lines, because they are so ******** overused. but at least the s**t rhymed high place / myspace. i actually expected more from teezy, but he was probably saving his good s**t but an opponent that he'd really need lines for i.e. Mak

Ok, Jaiden's 3rd and 4th

Jaiden's verse begans to heat up. He plays off of the avatar which is pretty cool or whatever, been there seen that. The fourth line, still aight, I guess it takes a lot to impress me. We finally get a little wordplay with the booty line, which is pretty cool, but mind you he has lost with the first two lines that were ******** shallow as mud puddle in a pothole But these two lines were solid had he put out more lines like this, the battle wouldve been harder to judge.

Aight, this is where we get concrete details

The funny thing is, he hasnt really dissed Jaiden directly yet, he has basically made this guy look horribly wack by announcing his accolades, then he sees a hole in Jaiden and attacks the sig. That was pretty original saying they had a love hate relationship because he met both Jaiden's dislikes and likes. Thats observation. When I battled Jaiden I didnt even think to look at his personals. and the two lines after that was a long summary saying, i just beat the s**t out of you already in a ******** in ya a** reference

Ok, this is where we find some local minimums

The rhyming is good coming in and then he says wordplay, something he really doesnt do and leads, and i didnt think he knew what it was until he actually said in a verse. That's all good, we skip down a line and we get turd-spray, now come on you couldve thought of something better than that. Taco Bell sucks some times but come on man turd-spray. NO not really a bad line not really a good line either. Ok Now things pick up, Jaiden goes for the avatar which is a good strategy. And what do you know Teezy's avatar does look like he was dressed by the queer eye guys, but he can do that. I mean my avatar has a emo hairdo and I make it just fine, s**t. Once again nothing, nothing short of solid actually.

Moving on

Ok in this area, it seems that Teezy gets ******** bored and decides to get at his potential future opponents because by this time, he has won. I mean what more is there to say. He starts out straight forward. and the s**t is true, he hasnt beat teezy and i dont think he ever will, he's got a long way to go. I mean the confidence is radiating off of the guy. He says, well, I already got this wrapped, let me get at my next opponent. While still consistently RHYMING. empty/MC missin/vicious HOOOOLD UP, that doesnt necessarily rhyme, but once again it can be slurred and still sound tighter than detectable and overlookable. thats why i didnt mention it in the summary of my vote


Ok these lines are not that good and dont go anywhere. Nice rhyming with recollect check and introspect, that was just wasted space, you couldve thrown some more substance in that s**t. Ok after that, now i know you read teezy's verse before you posted, and if you did, you would see that there is no way that guy doesnt have self-respect, so that is basically useless. wait a minute...this line is a bit confusing. i thought if you had self respect you would find it delectable, and not having it would make it not delectable, but , well...then again people want what they cant have so you might be saying because he doesnt "have" it he finds it delectable. ok, cool, thats nice but still a bit irrelevent. then we get to the infamous Dr. Huxtable. probably the lamest line in the whole battle. One it really has no damn place and Huxtable and delectable really dont sound all that good together, i just think your word choice kinda sucked. the line couldve been pretty nice but it just hung there, it kinda had some substance, but it just needed more to latch on to. another irrelevant line, when Teezy "retired" he retired on top. He designed the damn blacklist, that put rappers of your status at the top of the list. what the ******** have you done? and then its lines like the screech line that i just find whack as hell. more pathetic than a screech sex tape. thats not funny, tight or anything, it just sucked. you couldve called him pathetic in so many more ways.


Ok this set of lines marks consistence. He talks about himself which he has been doing basically the whole time because describing stryker is boring as ********. and he had some nice wordplay keys and kilos, that s**t was nice, caught me off-guard. and the punchlines falling trees line has more meaning than you would even think. and its true too. if a tree falls in the woods with no one around, who is going to hear it? no one so there is no sound, therefore teezy's lines hit harder than falling trees. He couldve easily said something better than calling jaiden boring as ********, but i guess he said why waste it, i think he should have, to add more to the slaughter that had already commenced four bars earlier.

Once again we get some ok rhyming and the complimentary strife that comes with all stryker verses. ok we get to talking about p***s or whatever but you know its an ok line but it seems like he's feeding into what teezy said about stryker not having d**k in a long time. and it seems that by saying that he is going to chop teezy's off i.e. touching it and making his own. so that line was pretty gay. plus lorena wont cut your d**k off unless you cheat on her, so teezy has to cheat on you so you can cut his d**k off and rob him of his manhood. that line once again was just nothing spectacular hell i just gave the lines more meaning.



The closing lines

it's damn simple, he says he could beat jaiden in his sleep which consistently follows his last set of lines while making it seem that he was going to beat jaiden until he was unconscious

Ok

Ok these closing lines couldve been better. the lemon line is pure a**, it's just nothing complex about it at all. now the french women line gives way for redemption its pretty nice and then slams himslef again cause he doesnt spit sick and kills himself with easily felt rhymes, ya damn right anyone can do that, thats basically what i get out of reading this s**t. i can teach my little cousin to rap like this in a week and he's like four and the line was basically filler but led to the last line which was pretty cool UNTIL we get to hideous and tedious. now hideous and tedious does not rhyme that well unless you have the accent of triumph the insult dog which i dont think you have, still an aight line though

So all in all, this couldve been an equal battle, had Stryker rhymed his words better and not used such simple lines, thats damn easy, and anyone can damn well do it. Teezy had some simples lines, that's where they equal at, but Teezy brought complexity. At points and clearly looking at the verse again, that was nowhere near teezy's best, he just did enough to beat the guy and ended up slaughtering him because jaiden actually destroyed himself with a lot of stuff. This was not a hard battle to judge at all. Jaiden's only consistence came with the fact that he dissed strictly teezy. but teezy like myself had a kill em all attitude and saw jaiden as henchmen and his next battle as the final boss battle. teezy on the other had consistency within his verse. it was like a full blown essay everything was in place and explained that is why he won, there you have it