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Posted: Fri May 18, 2007 1:16 pm
Elvenria ---------------- ~*~ Fan Review ~*~ ---------------- Princellah "Prepare for trouble." "And make it double." "To protect the world from devastation" "To unite all people into our nation." "To denounce the evils of truth and love." "To extend our reach to the stars above." "Jessie" "James" "Team Rocket blasting at the speed of light." "Surrender now and prepare to fight." "Meowth! Thats right!" "Prepare for trouble!" "And make it double!" "To protect the world from devastation" "To unite all people within our nation." "To denounce the evils of truth and love." "To extend our reach to the stars above." "Jessie!" "James." "Team Rocket, blast off at the speed of light." "Surrender now, or prepare to fight!" "Meowth! Thats right!" Pretty sure that's the anime version...I think. Never heard a motto more soaked in sarcasm than that one rofl Thanks! I couldn't remember it that good. x3
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Posted: Mon May 21, 2007 12:07 am
---------------- ~*~ Fan Review ~*~ ---------------- Lol, sibling fight! blaugh Love the chappie, Holly!
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Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2007 10:17 am
Chapter 9
Around 7Am, Ella wakes up with excitement in her eyes. She's ready to see this cave, and she's ready now! For now, she decides to let her sisters sleep. She knew if she would of woken them up, they would of yelled at her with a dreary passion.
Quietly, she walks out of the room. Around the very corner, she sees a trainer practicing for some tournament. Near the corner was a cafeteria. Some people were eating breakfast. This is boring, she thought. As she started to walk back into her room, she was about to introduce herself to her neighbors room since she saw they were up. But once she saw what uniform the girl was carrying, she quickly stepped away and ran back to Dawn's room.
"DAWN" she screamed. But no efforts from her were made.
Frightened by the knowledge she knew, she began to shake Dawn to wake her up.
"Dawn" "DAWN" she screams.
Emma woke up to hear Ella screaming something, while trying to wake Dawn up. Instantly, she got up; expecting something was wrong. For Ella to be screaming like that...so early in the morning...something has to be wrong. She looked at Dawn, and saw how she wasn't getting up still.
"Emma, please help!" cries Ella.
"Sure"
Before Ella even knew Emma was coming, Emma had gotten right next to Dawn and jumped on her while screaming, "BELLY FLOP"
Surprised, Dawn wakes up slowly and shoves the girl off her stomach.
"WHAT THE HELL IS YOUR PROBLEM" she screams with rage.
"Team Rock is here" cries Ella, before Emma could say anything.
With that, their bedroom door flings open. What they didn't know was that the person was listening to Ella's screams. She takes her weapon, which looks like a gun, and shoots an electrifying net right at them. As the three get entangled into the net, they all blurt out screams. The Team Rocket person, named Nancy, had sent out electrifying zaps. The zaps were so powerful that it caused them to get knocked out, and fainted while trapped in the net. So much for there plan to see the cave today.
After all the screaming, tons of people had come flying into the room. But what they say was a broken window, and glass scattered everywhere's. Nurse Joy went to look up at the window, and saw a jet take off. A black jet that had a huge R imprinted on it.
"Oh no..." she said, as she gasped about what had happened.
When she turned around, Nurse Joy blurted out,
"Nothing to see here..move along....move along"
The crowd slowly floated away, and a crew went to clean the room. It took them hours to clean, they had to be careful with the glass. As Nurse Joy went back to her usual job, she worried about what had happened. Kids had just been abducted, right here in this very building. Instantly, she decides to get a hold of the police. Hours later, this incident is spread all over T.V with thousands of people out searching now. Dawn's mother had seen this report, but didn't do anything to help. Little did she know, her own daughters were the victims of this terrible crime.
.....To be continued :3
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Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2007 10:13 pm
Chapter 10
Dawn was the first one to awaken. When she opened her eyes, the first thing she saw was a cage. Inside the cage were her sisters, along with her. As she glanced around the room in the plane, she spotted Nancy; the person who had abducted them.
"So what do you plan on doing with us?' Dawn asks.
"Ah, so you're awake" she replies, in a sneer voice.
"Answer the dang question!"
"You will only need to stay with us for a little bit. Once we finish our mission in the cave, you will be freed to do whatever you do."
"How about you let me out know!" she screams.
"How about NO. Now shut UP!"
With that, Nancy left the room to do other business. Dawn was left in the room all alone with her sisters. Quickly, she wakes them up. As they awaken, they get frightened by the cages surrounding them.
"Where are we?"
"In Team Stupid's Jet" she giggled.
"How are we gonna get out of this?" asks Ella.
"I don't know...they stole my pokemon from my pocket....Bleh."
"Oh"
"Don't worry"
Half an hour has gone by, and no sign of landing. When finally, the jet comes to a complete stop. They are now about three cities away from their destiny, and at Team Rockets secret base. The team rocket leader comes into the room with Dawn, and slowly opens their cage. Right after, his crew comes into the cage and cuff's their hands.
"Owwww" cries Emma in tears, as they scratch at her wrist trying to shut the cuff's.
"Shuttt up or I'll have to hurt 'ya" says the man.
"LEAVE HER ALONE! SHE'S ONLY A LITTLE GIRL!" screams Dawn.
Butch, the one cuffing Dawn; shoves Dawn on the floor. As she fights in tears, Butch screams at her,
"Don't act like a tough girl, or you'll be the one to get hurt! Behave like a prisoner!"
After being cuffed, they are then shoved in another cage at their base. They have to be held captive until Team Rocket finishes their mission, while Dawn is trying to stop their mission. That's when Dawn realized something...her pokemon, they're..... visible! Her pokemon are in the same room, they only need to get out. They're so close, yet so far away! After everybody leaves, they quickly come up with an escape plan.
"Ella, Emma, listen up! I have a plan, and I need both of your help!"
"Were listening!" as they reply in unison.
"Okay...first, they're going to come back with food for us. I saw them in the kitchen slopping a bowl of gruel together...blah. The moment they come in to deliver, allow them to give us the food. But the moment they turn around, Emma, I want you to run to the open door!"
"Yes sir!" says Emma.
"So what do I do?" asks Ella.
"Emma is going to try to escape, so of course...they're going to go after her. Right? Well, if they are all going after her, they aren't worrying about anybody else. The moment they have Emma, I want you to escape. They can't get you if they have Emma. Then quickly run towards my pokemon belt. Call out any pokemon, and then give the belt to me. If they slam the door shut, just have the pokemon attack it."
"Yes sir!" says Ella.
"Well, now that we have a plan...we need to wait for the right time! They better deliver the food fast!" says Dawn, in a cheery voice now. Excitement is in the air for them.
...Will our hero's be able to escape from the cell, or will their hopes and dreams be crushed? Find out in the next chapter, to be continued :3
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Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2007 10:29 pm
Chapter 11
With the three still trapped in the cage, they wait for the right moment to plan their escape. Suddenly, they hear noises from the outside. As the door is opened in the room, Butch and Cassidy appear in the room with gruel.
"Eat up, you don't want to starve!" sneers Butch in a teasing voice.
"Thank You" says Dawn.
"Don't get to flattered" says Cassidy, surprised she would actually be grateful.
Cassidy opens the cage followed by Butch serving the food. Cassidy stays near the exit, while Butch sets the bowls down. Like planned, Emma runs for the exit with all her might. Unexpectedly, Butch grabs the girl and shoves her down. Next, it's Ella's turn to make an escape. As she runs towards the gate, Cassidy tries to grab her. She couldn't make an escape, so she runs toward the end. As expected, Cassidy runs towards her and shoves her too down. With both caught, Dawn steps up and runs out successfully. If both of them were holding the two down, who's left to hold Dawn down? Nobody.
With Dawn free, Butch and Cassidy quickly let go of the twins and go after her. Dawn manages to grab onto her belt, but Butch tugs on her right sided arm arm dragging her down. Ella and Emma had escaped and jumped on Butch, but merely got held back by Cassidy. With all her might, she manages to send out a pokemon.
A little pink pokemon appears in the air.
"Mew!" screams Dawn.
The mew looks back with a surprised face, wondering why her name was being screamed and what was going on.
"That...that...that can't be! The legendary mew, I thought they didn't excist!" screams Cassidy.
"Oh, they sure do!" says Ella. "And it can kick your little a**!"
"You go Ella!" says Dawn in delight.
Before any movement is made, Dawn reaches back into the spot and grabs back her sisters pokemon. She throws them to Ella and Emma, before anybody could do anything.
"Mew! Psychic! Now!" screams Dawn.
Mew quickly transforms a powerful psychic attack, and launches it at Butch and Cassidy. The two get thrown back into the wall, and land with a strong crash. Glass had been thrown on them, and their backs were aching from the hard crash. They couldn't move anymore, Dawn and her team had won.
"Good job Mew!" says Dawn.
"CODE RED! CODE RED!" screams Cassidy in her walkie talkie.
Red lights begin to flash like crazy, sounds are heard from all over the place of people running.
"Emma! Ella! Mew! Hurry!"
The four begin to run all around the base looking for an exit, but there luck is running out. A swarm of Team Rocket's crew had come charging and swarmed them. There must of been hundreds all around them. With nothing to do, the three back into each other and send out their pokemon.
"Come out Shady! Glory! Ember! Aurora! Sparky! Mew! EVERYBODY GET READY!"
"Come out Piplup!"
"Come out Mudkip!"
All of the groups pokemon are released, 'causing all the others to send out there. Every single crew member had a houndour. With every single pokemon called out, there were hundreds against the three's pokemon. But despite number, Dawn still had the advantage.
"Shady, tackle! Glory, gust attack! Ember, fire blast! Aurora, Ice Beam! Sparky, thunder bolt!"
"Piplup, water blast!"
"Mudkip, water blast!"
After the attacks had been called, Team Rocket's pokemon had begun to attack. Piplup, Mudkip, and Aurora were the ones who could be most effective. With water attacks against a fire attack, the houndour has begun to faint...one by one. Ten minutes later, all the houndour had been beaten. This just proves quality beats quantity.
All of a sudden, one of the crew members shout out "ATTACK!".
But before any damage could be taken, Mew launches another psychic attack; sending the members back. The attack had hit an electrical appliance, 'causing it to explode. Followed by that explosion were more explosions. The place was going to blow!
"Everybody but ember, return!"
"Mudkip return!"
"Piplup return!"
As tons of Team Rocket members were screaming in panic, Dawn screams out to her charizard, "Ember, take us out of here!"
Ember quickly comes to their aid, and waits for them to get on. With everybody on, the charizard lifts off and flies out through the roof. The roof had already been blown up, letting them escape from it. Moments later, the place had exploded. When Dawn looked down, she freaked that they could of still been in it. She almost felt sorry for them, but then decided not to. They were the ones that abducted her in the first place!
"Ember, were going straight to the cave! We can make it! So...no dilly dally!"
"EEEEM" said the charizard, as it began to pick up in speed.
Dawn looked back at her sisters in fear and said, "You girls ready?"
"Yes sir!" they both reply in unison, as they hold on tightly.
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Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 9:25 am
Chapter 12
As Charizard glides over the open sky four hours, it finally comes across a cave. This cave was it, the cave they've been looking for.
"Ember, glide down!" says Dawn.
As the Charizard lands and gets returned to her pokeball, Dawn and her sisters look around the outside of the cave. Professor was right, there were pokemon coming out every five minutes. All of them looked like they were beaten to a pulp, and there were strange sounds inside.
"Come on...no time to waste!" says Dawn in a rush.
"Yes sir" says the girls.
As they follow in, they start to hear a voice getting louder. With every step, the scream increases. Inside the cave, the come across what used to be a lake. Now, it was a dry pit with no water.
"I'm scared" whispers Emma.
"I told you this was going to be tough"
"I want to go home!"
"Fine...you find a way to travel home by yourself"
"No!!!" she screams.
"Then follow"
"Fine"
As they begin to walk more, they realize they've walked half of the cave so far. When suddenly, Team Rocket had come charing at them and threw out there pokemon toward them.
"Go Goldbat!" screams the leader of the crew.
Quickly, Dawn shouts back "Go Sparky!'
Dawn's pikachu is released from her pokeball, and charges without no further instructions. It uses a volt tackle right at the crew, 'causing a hole at the top of the cave which sent Team Rocket flying in the air through it.
"Go job Sparky, follow us"
Sparky jumps on Dawn's shoulder, and prepares for any more battles that will occur.
~ To be continued ~
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Posted: Fri Jul 13, 2007 1:54 am
---------------- ~*~ Fan Review ~*~ ---------------- Please keep writing! -was silently lurking and reading-
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