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 Posted: Sat May 26, 2007 7:50 pm
*starts laughing uncontrollably* the background of the current akatsuki members.. wow, we're a messed-up bunch!
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Posted: Sat May 26, 2007 8:30 pm
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Posted: Sun May 27, 2007 1:16 pm
if you add the Kaguya rebirth and the new clan Auykawa then the story may get more interesting. PS add Shade and Zaruku
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Posted: Tue May 29, 2007 12:59 pm
This is gonna sound horribly arrogant, but I think that Sand Team 4 (Fujin, Barakku, Karu, and Yamanaki) is becoming important. We're kind of becoming the Team Six of the Sand, what with Akatsuki, Anti-Akatsuki, and whatnot.
Anti-Akatsuki's gonna be important too, methinks. I mean, founded by an ex-Akatsuki, and one of the members has already killed an Akatsuki...
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Posted: Tue May 29, 2007 2:31 pm
I think Akatsuki is going to have it's own little section since a lot of you want me to put them in there. And having that been said, I've decided to put some questionable things in there such as sex, lust, and other dark things. So yeah um..those people who are devoutly Christian, might not want it in there. If you do not, post here as to why.
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Posted: Tue May 29, 2007 3:19 pm
and another oneis gonna die from labor and become my living puppet so she can take care of the kids while i take care of the anti akatsuki
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The_Broken_Hearted_Lover Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue May 29, 2007 4:10 pm
All i can say is that i want one of these novels when your done. and i will save it forever mrgreen
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Posted: Wed Jun 27, 2007 10:45 am
sounds like a cool Idea supports you 100%
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Posted: Wed Jun 27, 2007 11:27 am
Thanks Tosh. mrgreen I'm kind of taking a break with it for now, more outlining I have to do and of course job stuff and whatever else might come my way.
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Posted: Sat Oct 06, 2007 12:39 am
I posted the prologue. Yeah, it is kind of short, but it is a ******** prologue. What are you gonna do? o.0 I shall be posting more of the chapters as soon as I have corrected them and stuff. And for all those monkeys that go around looking for grammar and spelling mistakes, piss off! >< I am using WordPad for Christ's sakes. It does not have a spell check thingy and I am too lazy to use one anyway. So there. xP
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Posted: Sat Oct 06, 2007 2:15 pm
Haku Needles I posted the prologue. Yeah, it is kind of short, but it is a ******** prologue. What are you gonna do? o.0 I shall be posting more of the chapters as soon as I have corrected them and stuff. And for all those monkeys that go around looking for grammar and spelling mistakes, piss off! >< I am using WordPad for Christ's sakes. It does not have a spell check thingy and I am too lazy to use one anyway. So there. xP If you need a beta Haku, I'd be more than happy to oblige.
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Posted: Sat Oct 06, 2007 9:29 pm
Tasukaru no Kurokaze Haku Needles I posted the prologue. Yeah, it is kind of short, but it is a ******** prologue. What are you gonna do? o.0 I shall be posting more of the chapters as soon as I have corrected them and stuff. And for all those monkeys that go around looking for grammar and spelling mistakes, piss off! >< I am using WordPad for Christ's sakes. It does not have a spell check thingy and I am too lazy to use one anyway. So there. xP If you need a beta Haku, I'd be more than happy to oblige. Beta? What do you mean exactly?
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Posted: Sun Oct 07, 2007 11:16 am
Betat is short fo a Beta Editor, which is really just someone who looks over the first draft of the story and makes sure that all the grammar and spelling stuff is in order. You said you didn't have a spell check, so I was offering to do it for you.
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Posted: Sun Oct 07, 2007 12:29 pm
Oh, alright. That could work. I could send you the drafts via e-mail instead of PM. Or whichever would work for you.
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Posted: Mon Oct 08, 2007 12:17 pm
email would be best, I think. Gaia is always difficult when I'm at school.
doctuhblackjack@gmail.com is the one I can check all the time.
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