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 Posted: Wed May 09, 2007 5:56 pm
Asher
You can here my screams,
as they echo through time
and space
They remind you
of my hate
I know you attempted,
to help us through,
but she still died,
because of you
By SSM (Serenity Silvia Malfoy)
Edit: hi all, just to let you know you can find more poems on my journal "the Diary of SSM)
Edit 2: The Point of View is Asher, sorry I forgot to put that.
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2007 6:04 pm
Abit harsh on the guy but pretty good.Nice Job wink
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2007 6:56 pm
Nice in content... what is the POV, for clearification?
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