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Something about the foot on the right (our right) is bothering me. It's something to do with the shape of the knee and the lack of definition between the knee and the calf (right now it just looks like one big mass of flesh).

To get that arm to look a bit more fore-shortened, I'd suggest making the arm shorter. Right now it just looks like a long arm and a little hand. Try to aim for a thicker arm and small hand instead...if you get what I mean.

Can't wait to see it finished! biggrin

Changed the knee, hand and added a left hand. It looks wierd because I resized it, I think I've got it right. whee

Not sure about the right arm still. I shortened it and made the hand smaller and the shoulder bigger. I don't think it worked though..

I'm just doing a little bit now and then because, like the thread suggests, I'm in the middle of exams. Fun. rolleyes

Yeah, I see what you're saying, the swing isn't really defined. What I was going for was the huge amount of power he got from that black suit. I liked the way the movie had him throwing himself in the air, right up there, before he sent out another web.

So I thought he could be pushing himself upwards arse first, sort of like a pole jumper I suppose, although it's only just occured to me how similar the pose is...

Do you reckon the chest should be turned more toward the back arm? I went and pretended I was spiderman lieing on my bed and that seems more natural.

I'm tired of having half-baked pictures in my DA gallery, I want this one to be done properly so I can be proud of it.