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 Posted: Fri May 04, 2007 8:01 pm
♠Saw it on deviant the other day, and drew it during a movie in biology today. Darth Horus.Artist I snagged the doodle from  Her ear and nose are funky, I know. xd ♠
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Posted: Sat May 05, 2007 8:35 am
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Dr. Valentine Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat May 05, 2007 11:41 am
The monster thing is kind of neat, but the profile needs an awful lot of work. D: Especially the shape/size of that chin, and the nose is a bit strange as well. I suggest using a reference next time. Here are some profiles. What picture from DA did you use for reference?
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Posted: Sat May 05, 2007 12:03 pm
♠Yeah, the chin is awfully manly and weird.
And it was just something I saw a glimpse of.♠
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Posted: Sat May 05, 2007 12:12 pm
♠ No cheekbone definition yet, but how's the shape?♠
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Posted: Mon May 07, 2007 11:00 pm
That chin's definately better, but you could probably stand to shave it down a bit more, maybe make it a little narrower. Also, the eyebrow's looking a tad angular and solid, if you softened it up and took away the harsh corners, it'd look more natural.
But that monster, that's gorgeous. whee
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Posted: Mon May 07, 2007 11:09 pm
i really don't think the jawline needs to be all that strong all the way to her ear, given the overall softness of her features. that, and you should try to imagine the shape of her jaw bone, to which the flesh and muscle would be attached in some accordance to that shape.
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Posted: Tue May 08, 2007 5:18 pm
The monster is really cool and creepy looking. The girl's profile needs some adjusting though.
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Posted: Thu May 10, 2007 8:30 pm
She/He/It has a Jay Leno chin.
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Posted: Thu May 10, 2007 9:26 pm
♠I've been trying to fix it, but it's hard when I don't have a tablet, and my utterly lazy persona.♠
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2007 12:53 am
basically, reduce the chin by half it's current size, then it should start to look better
everything else is on the right track though :]
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Posted: Tue Jun 26, 2007 2:17 pm
Darth Horus. Please remember that it's Darth Horus' concept. He's a close friend of mine. And here's my colored version of his "Transitional Serenity!"  And the original: 
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Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2007 11:40 pm
first post edited, cred given.
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