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Stryker Vs Yung_Vicious[Vicious wins]

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Jaiden Stryker
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Wed Apr 25, 2007 10:18 pm


I've seen you around, but never seen you battle. So I'm curious to what you can do.

Rules:
-1 round
-No more than 10 bars, no maximum to the number of lines to the bars.
-Biting, and recycling is fine. Just know that your choice may inspire judges to vote for you or against you depending on what you do and how you do it.
-If you know you're going to take forever, inform your opponent.
-Normally feeding is fine with me, but since this is only one round, it wont be allowed.
-No dickriding. There is no bigger crime in battles than dickriding. Friend or enemy.

When you see this, let me know if you want to go first or not. If you do, just spit. If not, let me know so I can go first.
PostPosted: Thu Apr 26, 2007 1:34 pm


i accept you can go ahead if you want i got some s**t to do right quick

Vicious_da_Cannibal


Jaiden Stryker
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Thu Apr 26, 2007 8:25 pm


Alright. I haven't been home long from work and just got settled. I'll drop something in just a few.
PostPosted: Thu Apr 26, 2007 8:46 pm


I'm using a different strategy this time, so yeah...



Yung_Vicious? You may be young, but you aint vicious at all.
In fact, you're about as hard as a deflated basketball.

If you could bounce, you should've bounced from this battle
instead of being led to slaughter like some ********' cattle.

But I'm sure you're used to being led, your LG's #1 dickrider.
Kiss a** to stay on the majority's good side, cuz you aint no fighter.
Hell, barely a writer. But you accepted my challenge as if you're tighter?
Shiiit, if you gotta girl, I suggest you write her,
and explain how you fell into the web of a spider.

And I aint talking about Silver, cuz this ***** is platinum.
Packin' a magnum in my wallet and glock, BOTH to make your a** numb.

Your rhymes are cheaper than a Payless shoe,
but I'm a world class emcee known for wreckin' crews.(World Class Wreckin Cru)

Vicious? Don't make me laugh, you're like the rapping Carlton.
With feats that can't surpass imaginary, like roleplays in Barton.

So get this fact wedged inside of you deeper than Lil' Kim's camel toe:
You're better suited being her personal Douche Baggalo(Deuce Biggalo).

Jaiden Stryker
Vice Captain


Jaiden Stryker
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Thu Apr 26, 2007 8:47 pm


Damn! >_< I couldn't beat 15 minutes.
PostPosted: Fri Apr 27, 2007 7:46 am


aight man i see how it is


Lyrically I can point out your insecurities
Higlighted rhymes defines your esteems purity
In essence/Here's a lesson/ya style is trite
Alliteration and assonance dont make s**t tight
You got about as much content in ya lyrics as miller light
With less feelin like severed spinal chords you on a treble score
I spit bass/ I stryke G's and cue em up sharp/ i cut vinyl swords
You must get higher than a suprano if you thought stun spores
Could beat flamethrowers i shame whores wit fire tactics
If you the hottest battler then b***h I bathe in sulfuric acid
But I dont so you aint/ flow sick you "caint" blowin d**k you rank
#1 like lloyd lickin lil wayne's a*****e for a hot single to bank
I will wach-ovia ya like southtrust I am-south but span over regions
You need a compass to find me but take heed and bring ya legions
Cause you just barely made the band like aubrey o'day
You'll get ya vanity slain for ******** with dannity cains/olbate
Lyricists get flattened like ******** up firestone they're fray
You dont know how to save a life, you as yellow as coldplay
My mic cord is the whip you my audioslave let's roleplay
I'm ya boss I'll sign off on this a** whuppin here's ya reverse o.k.

Vicious_da_Cannibal


Overlord Makairo

PostPosted: Fri Apr 27, 2007 1:53 pm


I'll give it to Vicious since I'm a personal fan of that type of style when it comes to a verse, but it's really because Jaiden's verse was full of very general punchlines in my opinion. He's known to do much better, I guess he's slacking off.

Vote: Vicious
PostPosted: Fri Apr 27, 2007 3:56 pm


But I'm sure you're used to being led, your LG's #1 dickrider 3nodding



Yeah Jaiden I'd vote for you but no...You kinda rushed this verse, not really alot of quality.

EX: "Vicious? Don't make me laugh, you're like the rapping Carlton. "



vote: vicious

OG the Don


Phoenix Fist

PostPosted: Fri Apr 27, 2007 8:05 pm


i'm starting to notice a pattern with you, jaiden. whenever you spit first, you always come kinda... weak. you had punchlines that were humorous, and I liked that line about "LG's #1 dickrider." but like someone said, it was rushed. i notice you alway go weak on your first verse, but usually make up for it by far in the following rounds, but this was only ONE round and you did it anyway. maybe you forgot? also, you need to stop trying to rush things in 15 minutes. i know you're a freestyle battler, but this is the internet, so stop ********' rushing! take advantage of the extended time like everyone else. you going light on vicious gave him the victory.

vicious, you came as expected... which isn't necessarily a bad thing. you had punches, and originality. nothing to make anyone go "OHH!" like jaiden's, but you were a lot more consistant, which is one of the key things to winning a battle.

so what is comes down to is jaiden having too many highs and lows while vicious maintained his consistancy. i'm voting for vicious.
PostPosted: Fri Apr 27, 2007 8:06 pm


Knock out

Syllvurr


Jaiden Stryker
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Fri Apr 27, 2007 8:19 pm


Damn, I got murked. XD

But it's a habit that I've been trying to shake, but not having much luck. I always go light with my first verse for some reason. Oh well. Not that I'm trying to take anything from Vicious or anything. As far as rushing it, it's a pride thing for me.

Thanks for the feedback folks. Especially since I wasn't expecting it... But it's great to have. Make it a habit! mrgreen
PostPosted: Fri Apr 27, 2007 10:33 pm


pride's a deadly sin for a reason, man.

Phoenix Fist

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