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PostPosted: Tue Apr 24, 2007 5:46 pm


So I wrote one a while ago.

From the depths a deeper dark arises. Behold the evil once called by the name of Khaldun. He steps from a pool of blood in the very sole of Hell, to approach the one who is called Mukarramma. She is the most feared being within the demon circles. She stands diligently on the edge of the pool. Her head bowed in the honor of those who have fallen, whose blood now resides here. "Are you here to attempt to slay me?" bellowed the towering beast. She gazed up, into his eyes and replied "Upon death we will be asked two questions and our answers will determine whether we can continue our journey in the afterlife. The first question is, "Did you bring joy?" The second is, "Did you find joy?". "I have neither found nor given joy. Only hatred and sorrows." he stated. She nodded and raised her beautiful sword. He stood ready for the fight. But with one swift move his head fell back and splashed upon the blood. He was slain. Her work was done. She blessed the undeserving beast and left.


Yep.
It was to match my layout on Xanga XD
Khaldun is some ancient demon.
I don't really remember for who and of what.
Mukarramma's name means something but I don't remember what now.
The questions are what Egyptian's believe when they die.
Or that's one of the believes o.O;
PostPosted: Wed Apr 25, 2007 7:08 am


Kinda cool.
I like the shortness of it.
I dunno.
I've always held a special part of my heart for supershorts.

sairandipity
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Baby Athena
Crew

PostPosted: Wed Apr 25, 2007 8:39 am


I love it.
It's all dark and awesome! whee
PostPosted: Wed Apr 25, 2007 1:09 pm


@ Saria -
S'ank you.
Yeah.
I get distracted a lot.
So supershortness is good for me ^.^;;;

@ Athena -
S'anks.
Yay for dark-ness ^.^
 

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XxXdollfacedXxX

PostPosted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 6:05 pm


im confused
PostPosted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 1:26 pm


XxXdollfacedXxX
im confused

How so?
 

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