R1ch_Boi
yo P you know how to break down vurses ive been studying that s**t but i cant figure it out and i need some one to teach me XD O_o
JS taught me how. but basically, try spitting it out loud or mentally. if you type it out, then spit it out loud, you should be able to see whether or not it flows right. sometimes you have to finish things on separate lines... bleh, i'm confusing myself. XD
but try not to fit too much in one verse. try keeping a rhythm when you do it. if something is too long or short, it'll screw up the flow. so try it outloud first before submitting.