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 Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2004 7:14 pm
Jazmin- Sketchhope its not too big x_x sweatdrop  It was going to be for the halloween piccu i wanted to do, but i changed my mind.
I just might finish this. sweatdrop
But i wanted a little bit of a critic on it. (plus I never posted anything here yet)
If you cant see it, heres a link to where i have it posted = http://www.deviantart.com/view/11959438/
what i used: Mechanical Pencil .5 and Blue Stadler Pencil
Jazmin is (C) me razz
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Posted: Sun Nov 14, 2004 11:59 am
Oooh, I really enjoy your style. Honestly, I can't see anything super wrong with this picture, but you might want to define a couple more fingers on the visible hand there. It looks like you may have erased a couple fingers that would have been there, but it looks kind of like a wonky claw or something without the other fingers there.
I really really like the body shape, and the head. You've got some serious talent~
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Posted: Sun Nov 14, 2004 5:39 pm
Yus, I really love your style as well. The girl looks like she has some spunky attitude... like fun-spunky, not diva-spunky.
Hrm... my critique would be on the hand as well, so I don't think you need to hear it again. However, to me it looks a bit too large, like the first segment of the finger(s) are too long or something... but that could only be because you haven't drawn them in entirely yet.
Great work though!
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Posted: Sat Nov 20, 2004 11:19 am
Thanks you both for your input biggrin
it helped lots heart 3nodding whee
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Posted: Sun Nov 21, 2004 1:23 pm
i think its cute. you're very good at curves, but i think the face just needs a little more work. Like, just a bit livelier, you know? more expressive.
otherwise its wonderful. 3nodding
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Posted: Mon Nov 22, 2004 5:48 am
I see nothing wrong with it except the fingers, and that's still no big deal since this is just a sketch. I applaud you for you great style. blaugh xd
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Posted: Tue Nov 23, 2004 8:09 am
hmmm... I don't see anything wrong with it. The char. looks great, the pose...everything seems overall good. ^__^ -gives a thumbs up-
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