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ShinningLight Vice Captain
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 Posted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 1:56 pm
Desire- Uchiha Sasuke never desired for anything except one. SasuHina oneshot
Disclaimer: I don’t own Naruto. I wish I did but if I did I’d be living it up.
Uchiha Sasuke never yearned; wanted, desired, or longed for anything or so he let people think. He desired one thing, only one thing, only one thing was precious to him, only one person was precious to him. He longed to see her again. One more time…
To see her… the love of his life,
To see her … his closest friend,
To see her… the only person he truly cared for.
To see her … the only person who cared for him.
To see her… the only person who could make him smile,
To see her … his angel from above.
He desired to be with her again,
To hear her laughter again,
To hear her soft calm voice, soothing him when he was angry,
To see her rosy red blush, when he complimented her,
To see her smile filled with honesty,
To see her snowy white eyes, filled with love for only one person him,
To hear her calling his name, to wake him up when he was in the hospital,
To see her face filled with, concern when he came back wounded from a mission,
To see her nod her head in understanding, when he told her about himself,
To see her eyes sparkle in joy, when he confessed his feelings for her,
To see her leap in excitement, when he proposed to her.
He longed to hold her in his arms,
He longed to protect her, and keep her safe,
He longed to tell her how much she meant to him,
He longed to tell her the effect she had on him,
He longed to live the rest of his life, with her by his side,
He longed to raise a family with her,
He longed to grow old with her.
He wanted, desired, longed, and yearned to see her one last time.
To kiss her one last time,
To hear her whisper “I love you,” like she did for the last time.
Even though he wanted her, longed for her, and her only but it was impossible.
Impossible for her,
Impossible for him,
Because she, Hyuuga Hinata, the one and only girl he cared about, passed away last year.
The end…
What do you guys think? I have the most reviews for this one than my other stories.
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Posted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 3:45 pm
As I thought when I first read it on ff.n, it's wonderful! I love how you explained everything, from beginning to end. Great job. ^_^_^_^
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Posted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 5:48 pm
I agree, I though it was very nicely done. ^^
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Posted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 3:35 pm
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ShinningLight Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 7:45 pm
AlwaysHiei As I thought when I first read it on ff.n, it's wonderful! I love how you explained everything, from beginning to end. Great job. ^_^_^_^
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Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 11:58 am
i heart it!
but the ending made me sad crying
great poem!
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