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Posted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 1:39 pm
Eclipse Fan fiction: By Jackie Clark Disclaimer: I own none of the characters. Though I wish I did, they are all Stephenie Meyer’s. This is what I want to have happen in Eclipse. Part one:
Driving away from the place I called home for the past two years was harder then I thought. I was scarred for Charlie. He had lived on his own, but since I had lived there I had made sure he was doing all right, so now that I was leaving I was worried that he had forgotten how to take care of himself. When I thought about why I was leaving though, it wasn't at all hard. I was moving in with Edward and the rest of the Cullens. I had graduated and Edward and I were in agreement. I would move in with them in the summer and then after a few weeks of planning (that was my idea, he wanted to wait longer) we would have a wedding. After that (he didn't want this at all) I would be come just like him. I was getting better at finding the turn off to his house but I still had trouble with it. He thought it would be a good idea if I left Charlie's house without him there. Something about how it would be better for Charlie. He also had mumbled something about getting a room ready for me. I didn't understand why I couldn't stay in his room. He had spent many a night in mine. When I pulled into the clearing around his house, everyone was waiting for me. Edward looked happy but still a little smug; Alice looked entirely elated that I was there. Esme and Carlisle looked happy too. Emmet stood there with a wide smile spread across his face. Standing next to him was a very unhappy looking Rosalie. That was expected though. Jasper stood behind everyone. After last year, he still wouldn't come near me. He still felt bad for what he had done even though I told him that I wasn't at all mad at him. I couldn't help but smile as I turned off the truck and stepped out. Alice danced her way across the short stretch of land that was between us and hugged me. "I'm so happy that you’re here!" She exclaimed "your room is right next to Edwards. I'm gonna help you get settled in. Oh, and don't worry about Charlie. He'll be fine" with that she took my arm and lead me to my room. "But what about my things?" I said as she stood me up in my room. It was bright blue on three of the walls. The other wall of course was completely glass. There was a tan couch on one side of the room a dresser on one wall and a bed not far from it. I knew that soon there would be no need for the bed, but until then I would still need to sleep. "Will my sleeping bother you guys?" I wondered out loud, suddenly self-conscience because I knew I talked in my sleep and with their advanced hearing I blushed at what they would hear when I was asleep. Alice just laughed. "What's so funny?" Emmet asked as he came in carrying what looked like half of my things. "Nothing, nothing. Just Bella being funny" Alice told him. "Now didn't I tell you not to do anything funny when I'm not around?" Emmet said, jokingly. Edward came in now, with the rest of my things. "Well, that's everything. We'll help you unpack."
Part 2:
Once I was settled in and unpacked, which didn't take long thanks to Edward and Emmet, I went with them down to the kitchen. Again I thought of a problem with me being human: they didn't have to eat but I did. Edward must have seen me because quickly he said "Don't worry about eating. Jasper is at the store now getting you something." I trusted Jasper but I really hoped he wouldn't get anything that I wouldn't. He had seen what I eat at school so maybe he would get me something like that. I couldn't live off of pizza and hamburgers for the next month though so I was still worried but decided that it wasn't a big deal right now. "So" Alice said "what do you want to do now?" I was shocked that she asked but then thought that she might just be trying to make me more comfortable. "How about a walk around the grounds?" Edward cut in. "Sure" I said "That sounds like fun" "Do you guy’s mind if I come?" Emmet asked "I could see if Rosalie wants to come too. Now that Bella lives here I was hoping that you guys would start talking. I mean soon you will be part of the family." "I don't mind" I said quickly for I could see that Edward was going to argue. I was also hoping to get on Rosalie's good side. "O.K. I'll be back in a bit." With that he rushed though the kitchen door to fetch Rosalie "I don't think this is a good idea." Edward said as soon as Emmet was out of the door. Like it really mattered though. Emmet could probably hear him. Rosalie too for that matter. "Well, Alice would say if she saw something that was gonna happen if it was bad!" I said, quickly and walked outside before he could say something. Within a second Edward was at my side, ready to argue again. "Alice wouldn't let anything bad happen to me and you will be there the whole time. Stop worrying." Lucky Emmet showed up right then so Edward didn't have a chance to argue again. "Rosalie said that she didn't want to come, she wanted more time to get used to the fact that you were living here and would soon be changed." Emmet proclaimed. "Well I don't really want to go for a walk then." I said. I only said I would go for a walk in hopes that Rosalie would come and we could be on better terms. " I think I should call Charlie and Mom. They wanted me to call when I got settled in. Which happened faster then it should have." "Well then let me show you the phone." Edward said. He looked kinda happy. Probably because we weren't going on a walk so he didn't have to worry about Rosalie doing anything to me. Edward led me into a small room with a desk and a phone. There wasn't much else in there. It really just looked like a storage room. Not surprising. The Cullens probably barely ever use the phone. With the exceptions of cell phones every now and then. I could only think of two times when Edward called me. Well, Charlie’s house anyway. I pushed the thoughts out of my mind. I didn't to think of the events that happened after the calls. I picked up the phone and dialed Charlie's number. After a short conversation, mostly of questions that we both had, he reminded me to call Renee. She talked to me about everything. I had just talked to her this morning but to her that must have been an eternity. Once I was off the phone I turned around to find that I was alone. "Edward" I said quietly. There was no need for yelling in this house. Within a second he was at the door. "I'm sorry Bella. I didn't know you would be off the phone so soon. I thought you might like some privacy to talk on the phone." "Like you leaving the room helped. I bet you heard every word that my parents and I said." "Well, I tried to not listen. Come on, I think you need to eat something." "Way to change the subject Edward. Are you hungry? Do you need to eat too?" He chuckled at that. I guess it was kind of funny. He took my hand and led me to his car. "I already "ate." "Why are we going to your car? I thought you said we were gonna eat?" "We are. We're all going out to celebrate you moving in with us. He opened the passenger door. "All of us?" I said as I got in. " Yes. All of us."
Part 3: Dinner with all of the Cullens should be a grand event. Seeing as I would be the only one eating. Wouldn't that be a scene, eight people at a party and only one of them eating. Well at least if everybody ordered something I could have left over's for a week. All I could think about on the way to the restaurant was how I would feel with everybody watching me eat. I hated being in the spotlight and with seven vampires watching me I was sure to make some blunder. "What are you thinking?" Edward asked, as he always did. Not being able to know what I was thinking like he could with everyone else, drove him near insanity. "Just about how I'm going to mess up at dinner tonight and the fear of everyone watching." I had learned that honesty was best the first time. Otherwise he would just con me into telling him, just by looking at me. He had that power over a lot of people, but he seemed to love using it on me. What's a girl to do really, when someone like Edward turns his lovely eyes on you? I never could get used to him, I thought I never would. "Don't worry so much. We are all used to your accidents so we are all prepared. No one is thirsty and Carlisle has his first aid kit with him, complete with stitching equipment. There's nothing to make you fret." "I bet your wrong." I replied, sounding like I was sulking. "I bet that everything will be just fine. Plus, we made sure to tell the resterant that we want plastic plates. That way you cant break it and you can't get a paper cut!" "Haha, very funny." "It's not ment to be. It's just to keep you safe. And alive. Human." "Well what if I don't want to be human?" "That's too bad. You promised to wait until the wedding. So you can be human until then." "Fine. But I wont like it." "Yuo don't have to like it" Be the time he said this we had arrived at the restuarant. It was supposed to be a twon hour trip, but thanks to his crazy driving we got there in only thirty minutes. The other Cullens were already there. Edward opened my door before I even realized that he was out of the car.
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Posted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 1:40 pm
That's all I have for now. If you guys want more then I think I can think up some more.
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Posted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 7:47 pm
its cool. i'll try to remember to read more once you post it!
if you want constructive criticism: i don't think Edward would be the one wanting to wait longer than a few weeks of planning to be married. after all, it was his idea.
if you don't want CC or that was a typo: cool cool!
either way. keep up the good work!
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Posted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 6:14 pm
1) thank you 2) i just thought that thats how Edward would want it. That he would want to avoid the day after the wedding (changeing Bella) as long as he could, but Bell a wouldn't wait longer then a few weeks.
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Posted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 7:27 pm
Pretty cool fanfic biggrin
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Posted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 7:38 pm
Komugi_8 1) thank you 2) i just thought that thats how Edward would want it. That he would want to avoid the day after the wedding (changeing Bella) as long as he could, but Bell a wouldn't wait longer then a few weeks. yes, i see what you mean.. good job on part 2!
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Posted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 12:34 pm
thank you. i'll have part 3 comeing soo hopefully! if i can think of some more sweatdrop
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Posted: Mon May 07, 2007 7:35 pm
ok thats all i have for now. Really i have more but my mom is making me go to bed now......oh being 17............. emo more tommarow prolly!
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Posted: Sun May 13, 2007 2:57 pm
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