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Subobo

Spooky Codger

PostPosted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 3:12 pm


=D Hii! I'm Subo, and I lurk.
Alot. And one happy day, my dorkiness crashed headlong into my old concept (I heard something in there break D=), this concept resulted.

So...critiques would be greatly appreciated when I get finished setting up, since this concept hasn't been around long enough for me to get rid of the loose ends =d <33

Subo needs moar organization =X

Andandand I'm just getting in the bones of the thread in right now xD I SHALL PRETTIFY IT LATER.

I'm sorry to disappoint science fiction fans, but if information is preserved, there is no possibility of using black holes to travel to other universes.
-Stephen Hawking
PostPosted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 3:23 pm


Fel Essence

Quote:
Light-Emitting Black Hole
"A black hole is an object with a gravitational field so powerful that no form of matter or radiation (including light) can escape."
....But, if nothing can escape from a black hole...then why is there light shining from it?

And more importantly, how did it get in the vial? Even the smallest of black holes would still be too large to fit in such a small container. And would annihilate everything in the area.

Well, this is certainly strange..


If you jump into a black hole, your mass energy will be returned to our universe but in a mangled form which contains the information about what you were like but in a state where it can not be easily recognized.
-Stephen Hawking

Subobo

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Subobo

Spooky Codger

PostPosted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 3:29 pm


Soul

Anglerfish
Quote:
Anglerfishes are bony fish in the order Lophiiformes.
An anglerfish has a head of enormous size, broad, flat and depressed, with the remainder of the body appearing merely like an appendage.
Anglerfishes are mostly deep-sea fish, though there are some families that have shallow-water representatives.
As most anglerfish live mainly in the oceans' aphotic zones, where the water is too deep for enough sunlight to penetrate for photosynthesis to occur, their predation relies on the "lure" being bioluminescent (via bacterial symbiosis). In a related adaptation, anglerfish are dull gray, dark brown or black, and are thus not visible either in their own light or in that of similarly luminescent prey.


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PostPosted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 3:36 pm


Raevan

Name: Ciel/
Gender: Female
Fel Essence: Light-Emitting Black Hole
Soul: Venus Anglerfish
Hair color: ?
Hair style: ?
Eye color: Black (Possibly completely black)
Skin color: Veryveryvery pale (with possibly a greyish undertone)
Markings on skin: None?
Clothing style: Elizabethan =D Or Space-y/futuristic
Wings: ?? Noidea
Horns: The Anglerfish lure. Ttly. And the ubar teeth of death.
Ears: Normal?
Accesories: Very few, if any.
Personality: Very...quiet. And morbid. She really doesn't make much noise, and rarely speaks. She seems quite spacey, and can be seen zoning out on a regular basis. (though interaction with others might bring her out of this spacy funk). Due to the anglerfish soul, she doesn't really think much of males, and will either not take what they say seriously or just outright ignore them.
Another influence would be her seemingly unending patience. She can (and will) just...sit/float for hours at a time waiting for something.
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral

One could say: "The boundary condition of the universe is that it has no boundary." The universe would be completely self-contained and not affected by anything outside itself. It would neither be created nor destroyed. It would just BE.
-Stephen Hawking

Subobo

Spooky Codger


Subobo

Spooky Codger

PostPosted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 3:37 pm


Guardian

Name: Alena Garber
Nicknames: Allie, Alien
Gender Female
Age: 18
Hair: Dark brown, shoulder length
Eyes: Greenish-brown
Height/weight: 5'7"/Don't ask
Likes: Reading, doodling, horror movies, SciFi/fantasy stuff
Dislikes: Very hot weather, being bored, lectures
Distinguishing features: Not many at all. She tends to blend in the crowd, and doesn't really do much to keep it from being that way.
Clothing: At work, she usually wears button-up shirts and a long, floor-length skirt and a pair of very clunky boots, and glasses, which no one is quite sure if she actually needs them or wears them just because. The rest of the time she wears clothes more for comfort than appearance, usually jeans and a t-shirt and a hoodie if it's cold.

I have no idea [what my IQ is]. People who boast about their IQ are losers.
-Stephen Hawking
PostPosted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 3:39 pm


Reserved

Disorder increases with time because we measure time in the direction in which disorder increases. You can’t have a safer bet than that!
-Stephen Hawking

Subobo

Spooky Codger


Subobo

Spooky Codger

PostPosted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 3:41 pm


Reserved

To show this diagram properly, I would really need a four dimensional screen. However, because of government cuts, we could manage to provide only a two dimensional screen.
-Stephen Hawking
PostPosted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 3:43 pm


Reserved

My goal is simple. It is a complete understanding of the universe, why it is as it is and why it exists at all.
-Stephen Hawking

Subobo

Spooky Codger


Subobo

Spooky Codger

PostPosted: Thu May 03, 2007 5:25 pm


ninja Kay, got some stuff fixed and deleted and edited and added and such and such <3
PostPosted: Thu May 17, 2007 5:05 pm


domokun Added and fixed abitmore <3

Subobo

Spooky Codger


Ebony Shade

Romantic Seeker

PostPosted: Fri May 18, 2007 10:16 pm


I like your anglerfish soul a lot because I feel it could make for a really nifty looking raevan. Though your essence I'm not quite sure about. Maybe instead of using a black hole scenario, how about just concentrating on the gravitational portion of it? I could really see it working well with your raevan's lure. To go a step further you could even start thinking along the lines of magnatism as that too pulls things in or you could switch the whole concept around and have it push things away or something. Anyway, yeah, that's just my suggestions.
PostPosted: Sat May 19, 2007 6:53 pm


=D Thanks!

Ooh, like a repellent black hole? That would be might awesome indeed xD

Subobo

Spooky Codger


Ebony Shade

Romantic Seeker

PostPosted: Sat May 19, 2007 8:08 pm


biggrin You're welcome. Perhaps you'll stop by my quest thread sometime and let me know what you think. I'd appreciated any help and/or suggestions you may have.
PostPosted: Tue Jun 26, 2007 7:29 am


Oh wow... Gawd, I love the lophiiformes!
Anglerfish rule. They're pretty damn ugly, but come ON, natural genetical chimerae, how often do you come across DAT eh?

Really sounds like a cool idea, along with the black hole concept. *wonders how it'd ever fit in a bottle*

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 17, 2007 5:46 pm


Hmm~. I like anglerfish idea too (weird animals ftw <3) though I think the black hole idea can be improved upon--since they do actually emit light (and other forms of radiation) from the accretion disk around them, though the holes themselves remain dark.

Maybe a Naked Singularity? Since the theoretical existence of one anywhere in the universe would cause a resultant breakdown of the laws of physics and TOTAL CHAOS.

...seems like a good Fel essence to me. rofl
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