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Posted: Thu Jul 29, 2004 11:07 am
Hey here's some poems for everyone to read^_^ Could you all rate them as well? Thanks a bunch! *~Danielle~*
"Memories"
Instant flashback, Present life-all a blur, Rush of past experiences, A taste of what used to be,
I cherish the happy times, Welcome them into my heart, Scowling I think of the sad, horrible times...as teardrops roll down my cheeks...
Then all of a sudden, Everything is back in motion, Life now is no longer a stand-still, My memories have come back to visit me... And now they have to go...
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" A Voice Unheard"
I speak, yet no sound comes out, My yell is a soft whisper, I paint, yet there is no picture... My heartbeat is a low humming, I write-yet the story has not even begun, My life is a soul-less journey, I love...yet I have yet to be loved...
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"Energy Boost"
Ultimate sugar rush, Sudden hyperness, Emotions running wild, Ready to explode inside
What is this random burst of cheery alive-ness? Filling me with laughter, All I want to do is run that extra mile, Make that high-jump, Do a crazy dance, Laugh with all my friends, Take that once-in-a-lifetime chance...
Cannot sit still... Cannot keep quiet, Not satisfied until... I've created a riot!!
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"Sweet Death"
Hot tears streaming down my cheeks like rain upon the parched land, I am the doe that was injured by the hunter's gun,
And I am now collapsing to my death...
I clutch my heart, as it burns...more than ever, Never before have I felt a pain like this,
Inside I am screaming as if being purged by the fires of hell,
Yet outside, I am frozen still, My body has not the strength to move,
As I see the world for the last time...
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ps- I'm gonna post more poems!-Danielle-
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Posted: Sat Jul 31, 2004 4:18 pm
Hey, you have a unique style you should be proud of, and a lot of these seem to be reflective, I envy your honesty.
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