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Hello, everyone.

My name is Alyssa, and I want to be a writer/poet.

However, my writing skills suck. I have been told that my poetry is decent, so I would like everyone to read and comment.

The more comments I can get the better!

Thank you and enjoy.





With Him Never Knowing That I Loved Him

"I'm so scared for him"
Was all that she could say
"It's happening all over again
And I know it's not OK
But I'll try anyways to hold on
But I'll try anyways until it's done."

There's bloody drops of his life on the floor
He's begging, screaming for lots more
There's broken shards of her heart on the floor
She's begging, screaming for no more
She's crying

"He stole my soul away from me
When he took his own life away
If he had asked me
I would have taken his misery
And swallowed it whole
Just to see him happy"

"I do want him to know"
Was all that she could cry
"But I'm afraid that he will go
And leave my heart to die
But I'll try anyways to hold on
But I'll try anyways until he's gone"

She's cursing herself to sleep
She'll never try to dream again
He never just how deep
Her love was for him
And now, she'll never get a chance to tell
And now he'll never get a chance...
To get the hell out of Hell
And hear her crying.

Thank u. I'm glad u liked it! blaugh


Here's another poem from yours truly...


A Little Girl's Victory and Defeat

I'd give up everything in this lonely world
If only to have another chance to live
To never have to be that girl
Who never has anything left to give
Except her hatred, except her pain
Except her heartache, except her shame

Of living alone in a world full of dangers
And never having a place she can call home
Living with all of the pain, all of the dangers
That she always faces alone

She may not have an angel
To guide her on her way
To protect her from the demons
Who torment her in her sleep
When she tries to escape
With a tear and a prayer
Her evil breaks out and kills
The innocence that I've locked so deep
Inside of me
That I can barely hear her cry:
"Please set me free"

I'm so sick and tired
Of living in a world full of heroes
Who will never come to rescue me
They're surrounded, they're blinded
By cameras and obsessed zeroes
Never seen, that little girl had to learn to be
Left alone, wishing to be loved by someone
Left alive, Wanting to be heard by anyone

She may not have an angel
To guide her on her way
I may be cursed to Hell
But I'll still take the time to pray:
"Please help me try and save this little girl
Slowly vanishing in fromt of me"
She's vanishing, she's crying
She's dying in front of my eyes