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Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 7:53 pm
This is one of my poems I wrote fast...I think this is a dumb poem, but you all can judge
The Anime Life By KS
Life is dull nothing happens.
But when I watch Anime
The life inside me begins to roll
As the exitement of the show takes my heart
I cry, and laugh And Laugh and cry
The Anime Life brings out the joy.
It sends a Deep mesange hidden in its humor
If you wish to be happy watch some Anime
Or read a monga or a Anime Novel
The End ***************
Ok this sounds stupid, I just write or type what pops in my head and I feel like sharing
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Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 8:30 pm
its not stupid.. take pride in how ou write your work.. thats how do it as well.. I loved the poem!
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Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 9:30 pm
thx...but its not my best work
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Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 4:31 pm
hmm it got some potential, prety good if you just wrtote it without planning. biggrin
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Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2007 6:43 pm
here like 2 that I found... in my planner...not to good sounds gay but thought yall might like it
Welcome to my …..
Welcome to my world
Separated world Do you feel alive
Down here Is like poison to your mind.
You where there But can comprehend
I was there for you You for doubt for me
You and I
Welcome To my world She says
Separated World She says
You where here But you gave me doubt
You place A chill In this Separated World
This could be the last time You stand by my side This evening ******************* the THis is like that cause I want it like that THis World
In THis World Where life is strong
In THis World Where one is all
In THis World Lifes an open book
Hyper active, Instrumental
Countdowns started And its time to blow
Don’t stop now
Like a running man In THis World
In THis World Where compromise does not exist
In THis World Don’t Fear the Fall
Every Step Meets the Rest
Only way to break free Is to break the mold
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Posted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 8:25 pm
I think u wrote both really great, but I think the topic is... well, not what I usually read. But its still good.
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