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A poem I wrote fast

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Kotaro Seta

PostPosted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 7:53 pm


This is one of my poems I wrote fast...I think this is a dumb poem, but you all can judge

The Anime Life
By KS

Life is dull
nothing happens.

But when I watch
Anime

The life inside me
begins to roll

As the exitement
of the show takes my heart

I cry, and laugh
And Laugh and cry

The Anime Life
brings out the joy.

It sends a Deep mesange
hidden in its humor

If you wish to be happy
watch some Anime

Or read a monga
or a Anime Novel

The End
***************

Ok this sounds stupid, I just write or type what pops in my head and I feel like sharing
PostPosted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 8:30 pm


its not stupid.. take pride in how ou write your work.. thats how do it as well.. I loved the poem!

~[Wingless-Angel]~


Kotaro Seta

PostPosted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 9:30 pm


thx...but its not my best work
PostPosted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 4:31 pm


hmm it got some potential, prety good if you just wrtote it without planning. biggrin

Mordred kaides


Kotaro Seta

PostPosted: Thu Apr 12, 2007 6:43 pm


here like 2 that I found... in my planner...not to good sounds gay but thought yall might like it

Welcome to my …..

Welcome to
my world

Separated world
Do you feel alive

Down here
Is like poison to your mind.

You where there
But can comprehend

I was there for you
You for doubt for me

You and I

Welcome To my world
She says

Separated World
She says

You where here
But you gave me doubt

You place A chill
In this Separated World

This could be the last time
You stand by my side
This evening
*******************
the THis is like that cause I want it like that
THis World

In THis World
Where life is strong

In THis World
Where one is all

In THis World
Lifes an open book

Hyper active,
Instrumental

Countdowns started
And its time to blow

Don’t stop now

Like a running man
In THis World

In THis World
Where compromise does not exist

In THis World
Don’t Fear the Fall

Every Step
Meets the Rest

Only way to break free
Is to break the mold
PostPosted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 8:25 pm


I think u wrote both really great, but I think the topic is... well, not what I usually read. But its still good.

Sergent Oblivious

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