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Poetry?

XxDea7h 3me2puSxX

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Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2007 10:16 pm

Author: Grimnir the Demonic one

The Wrath of Death

I feel a cold wind at my feet,
Death do I greet
Death will I meet
His touch so sweet.

Death shall reap thine spirit tonight,
Granting me flight
From the grim sight
Sparing my night.

Deaths relentless anger shall bloom,
From aught he looms,
Bringing the gloom,
Bringing my doom.

Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 4:11 pm

I like that!!! A little dark, but very nice ring to it, flows nicely. Any other thoughts?

Monkeyinafryingpan
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Bluefry
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Posted: Sat Apr 07, 2007 7:43 am

Er....a little cliche i think, but not bad, not bad...at least u can string sentences together,lmao. i know i cant

Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2007 2:13 am

I'm glad that I could actually finish your poem. It was great in its shortness.
Here's mine:

Eat them blasted crayons.

If anyone asks I'll be eating.
Me and the crayons have a meeting,
and we shall settle this for good,
I'll make the crayons into food.
If you like them like I do
If you'd like to eat them too
Then you sure know what to do

Eat them blasted crayons.