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 Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2007 6:19 pm
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Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2007 10:01 am
o.o wow the ending was hot...it's very good must have MORE
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Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2007 1:28 pm
Please don't get mad at me for what i'm about to say sweatdrop
Shino and Gaara were pretty out of character, neither would blush or stutter. I understand it's AU, but they should still be in character a bit more than that.
It was a bit rushed, kinda 'I just met you, but let's make babies anyway!'
The actual story was pretty good, and the end was awesome whee
Again, please don't get mad at me gonk
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Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2007 1:43 pm
Raining_Skittles Please don't get mad at me for what i'm about to say sweatdrop Shino and Gaara were pretty out of character, neither would blush or stutter. I understand it's AU, but they should still be in character a bit more than that. It was a bit rushed, kinda 'I just met you, but let's make babies anyway!' The actual story was pretty good, and the end was awesome whee Again, please don't get mad at me gonk I'm not mad. Lika I said it was my first one and I don't don't know if I'll continue. I'm working on getting the charie thing good. sweatdrop Right now I started a Kankuro and Kiba story. This one might be a one shot. 'Let's make babies.' xd Like they could anyway! But yeah I do appreicate your input. Do you have any suggestions if I decided to continue the Shino Gaara one?
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Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2007 2:18 pm
You're starting a KankurouxKiba story? I SO want to read it! >w<
I liked it.
Not a couple that would come to mind when someone mentions Naruto yaoi, but...It's cute.
They ARE indeed out of character...but it was cute. 4laugh
And it wasn't as rushed as Raining_Skittles said...I mean, it was rushed in the way that it came pretty soon in a fic...but they didn't just meet.
You did say that they'd known for about a week...which is long enough for hormonal teenagers alone in a park. xd
But I thought it was good ^^
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Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 6:05 pm
I put up my KanxKiba story! whee *dances* I hope I got the charies right this time. They only know eachother a week in this one too... sweatdrop heh. I never was a paitent person! twisted So yeah enjoy! Just use linky above. 3nodding
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Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 1:13 pm
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Posted: Sat Apr 28, 2007 9:12 pm
in the first paragraph, it says he kicked off his still sleepy body,...
other than that, awesome, i loved the ending ^-^
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