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 Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 7:50 pm
the title of this thread was a quote from Joan Didion.
and the following poem was inspired by it.
Stand still, hold on to the edge. Back away -slowly- come home, hold tightly to me -my love- don't fly away as a wisp on the winds of today, just wait by me and stay until -the gails of- tomorrow come. So fold your wings and stay for me until eternity, -don't let go- until we can float away -together- forever.
A little confusing, I know. And it's still a first draft, i've got loads of fixing up to do. The words with -dashes- around them are transition words, they belong to the previous sentence and the following one...I thought i'd try something new when I wrote this...so...how do you like?
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Posted: Fri Apr 13, 2007 8:32 pm
Pretty cool! i say that it is really awesome, but that's just me.
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