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 Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 5:30 pm
Rules:
~ No posting in this thread unless it's your test.
~ Limited to 4 posts. You can use less.
~ You have 2 weeks to finish your rp
~ Must use the battle field type assigned to you
~ You create a monster of your choice
~ Have fun!
1~Ice- Pretty simple with this one. The floor becomes solid ice. There are random chunks of ice protruding from the floor. And of course, you have little to no traction.
2~Desert- Pretty much nothing but massive sand dunes. You sink down into the sand, which slows you down a LOT. If the wind blows, the sand gets kicked up, which obscures vision.
3~Open Field- A plain grassy field with nothing on it.
4~Ocean- A mini ocean about 40 feet deep. There are five floating platforms for battlers to stand on. The plat forms bob around and it's really hard to keep your balence on them.
5~Dense Forest- The arena is packed from wall to wall with dense, tropical trees. As in any tropical jungle, there are lots of vines and other such things to get tangled up in.
6~Land of Fire- Parts of the arena floor sink away, leaving behind pits of lava. Also, pillars of fire erupt from the floor periodicly
7~Concrete- A plain concrete floor.
8~The Abyss- Near complete darkness engulfs the arena. Dark energy is abundant in this field.
9~The Sanctuary- Opposite of the Abyss. Light energy fills the arena. Its very bright!
10~No floor- The floor drops away leaving a pit filled with spikes. There are levitating platforms at varrying heights, going all the way to the top of the arena. It's hard to jump from platform to platform, and trust me, you don't want to fall.
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Jessra Kaji generated a random number between
1 and 10 ...
5!
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Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 5:32 pm
5~Dense Forest- The arena is packed from wall to wall with dense, tropical trees. As in any tropical jungle, there are lots of vines and other such things to get tangled up in.
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Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 7:41 pm
As Delia entered the testing ground she drew her guns. Pistols she had with her since she was still with her father, her hand craved writing on their sides. They were personalized by her, she had taken then apart and put them together more times than she could count. One in each hand, her finger ready on the trigger she had just fixed, because she had tried to make them to sensitive, and they jammed as a result quite often. She'd done a million or more drills similar to this in basic training; so she wasn't very nervous about this test. However it wasn’t until she stepped out and trees extended everywhere that all her nervousness disappeared completely. This was her haven, her home, where all of her senses had been tuned and tested as a child. Forests were where she went to think, to breathe, to see her sisters...She was part of the forest, and knew that there were plenty of formidable adversaries that could leap out to harm her within it. To say she was nervous; wouldn’t be true, because she knew everything to know here, and as a trained officer could manage herself fine. Still, there were memories, memories she could never shake from her consciousness, memories of her youngest sister.
She couldn’t allow her sisters death distract her now. She was training; testing herself. That meant she had to be focused, had to be ready. It meant she couldn’t allow silly things like her lust for revenge cloud her thoughts, and distract her. This test would have nothing to do with Luciernaga, so that she had to remain focused on the task at hand, and that requires cool, calm, accuracy and precision. Regardless, she couldn’t help but find her mind wander, and see the cute small face of her dear deceased sister Kestral. Watching her run ahead, laughing and smiling, calling out to her, beckoning her to follow.
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Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 8:00 pm
As she walked in she felt fine and her memories weren’t being a massive distraction, and then she smelled something…strange. She looked around trying to find the source to no avail. So she continued on into the forest, at first slowly making her way on the ground, hoping nimbly from vines to dirt to rocks. Leaping quickly from each perch without tripping and without fumbling. Then she carefully and fluently she tossed herself into a tree and perched herself onto a strong sturdy branch. She stopped there, crouched down, smelling, waiting, looking. Her hair fell down by her side, her ears twitching as her eyes stared off slowly scanning the area. Her prey was nearby, and she wasn’t going to let it have the upper hand. This was her mindset, and it was disturbed and thrown off when she felt sludge drip onto her arm. She winced from the starling realization of it, stared at the black, brown sludge for a moment, then looked up.
Above her was a horrifying creature, it looked like some sort of octopus, mutated with a man and then tossed in a swap and made into goop. It was brown and black and green, with deep dark crevasses for eyes and a mouth, at least what seemed to be a mouth. The moment her eyes landed on it; it’s “arms” stretched out towards her reaching out for her. She pushed herself backwards, swinging down and falling towards the ground as she shot two rounds up at the creature sending it recoiling into the trees. Then she twisted and managed to land cat-like on the ground. Then she darted to a tree and took cover, her nose scanning for the creature; her ears listening, her every sense looking and waiting for it, with her guns up and ready to attack.
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Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 5:53 pm
Delia stood still, listening carefully to the greenery around her. The creature may think it has the advantage, but it would be wrong. She smelt it before she heard it, the stench of rotting flesh and foliage. Then she heard the strange squishing and almost gushing noise of the creature. She smiled and pin pointed the sound and smell’s origin. Once she had figured out it’s position she had only to wait until she attacked. There was nothing but green around her, and since the creature blended so well with these colors she knew she would have to trust her other senses to fight this beast.
She closed her eyes and leaned against the tree, feeling the rough uneven scratch of it’s bark on her back. She smelt beyond the stench and found the dense pine smell of the trees, the smell of rain still new and wet on them. Then she blacked these out, and turned the pleasantries of the forest into white noise; and muted it. Then, in her mind world there was only her, stalks of what she knew to be trees in dense black, and the creature. She cocked her gun and pushed herself from the tree, twisting herself and pointing her guns right at the beast and firing.
Her pistol was an automatic, which meant she didn’t have to c**k it again; once the safety is off, she’s good to go. But she only had two clips, and in each clip only nine rounds. She had just fired off five from each of her gun, and looking over to the creature from her tree cover; it was stunned but otherwise uneffected. Without reloading she had only two shots left in either of her guns...and that didnt seem like it would be effective.
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Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 7:29 pm
She put her guns into their holsters and locked them in, switching the safety on once again. She could hear it coming for her again, she needed a better attack plan. She sighed and closed her eyes again. She could hear and smell that…THING getting closer. It was inching along ever so slowly towards her hiding spot behind her latest tree. Of course she knew as well as anyone it knew she was here; after all it saw her tumble here after shooting. She needed to think fast, she had one other weapon on her body, a knife…not very good for long range fighting but perhaps that was what she needed to avoid. She drew out her blade, a standard issue officers knife, nothing special. Then she stepped out from the tree and faced the creature.
If she wasn’t sure it didn’t have a mouth, she would have sworn it smiled at her sinisterly as it’s long gooey arms jetted out towards her. If this had been anything besides what she had been expecting she might have freaked, but she WAS expecting it; so she stayed calm. “Stop!” She said firmly, her skin glowing softly a small star lit up on her forehead and her palms as she extended one towards the creature and it immediately froze in it’s place. She know had about half a minute or less to do what she had to. So without wasting another second, she bum-rushed the monster her knife firmly held in her left hand. She got up to his face and cut the knife across where his eyes seemed to be, then drove the blade deep in and downwards. After a moment she saw blood and her power fizzled out leaving the creature to scream out as she dug her blade around it’s flesh. It’s lost control of it’s extremities and flailed about and then stopped and fell to the ground. Bloody, gooey, and dead.
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Posted: Sun May 13, 2007 2:54 pm
Scoring:
A- 85 credits
B- 75 credits
C- 65 credits
D- 45 credits
F- 20 credits
Length and Pacing: even length, pacing was fast though
General Grammar Rules: You backslid with this one. Poor grammar.
Personality: i liked it, but it didnt pop out at me.
Use of Environment: Good. You used it to hide and search through.
Details: you described the surroundings pretty well, but i didnt see the character or the monster as much.
Overall: C or 65 creds
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Posted: Sat May 19, 2007 12:49 pm
Scoring:
A- 85 credits
B- 75 credits
C- 65 credits
D- 45 credits
F- 20 credits
Length and Pacing: even length, pacing was fast though
General Grammar Rules: Iffy.
Personality: It was alright, could've been better.
Use of Environment: Good~
Details: Alright. A comment, however - stop using 'she' every sentence - that takes away from the familiarity of the piece. Use other descriptive factors, such as her name or physical description, like "The *blank*-eyed girl" or similar. 'She', 'she', 'she' gets really repetitive and old.
Overall: C or 63 credits
(Also, just for the sake of my poor eyes, that color made me whimper in pain and it was difficult for me to read. Could you maybe choose a darker one for later exams?)
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Ketsueki Yuki Vice Captain
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