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 Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 4:27 pm
this is sort of about cookies but more about good friend sna dn how they are alwaysd there.... ok well ere it is......
Chocolate cookies
Crumbs upon the floor
Calories galore
Maladies and remedies
Check flicks on a table
Popcorn to the right
Five sisters
Called in need
To help pass the night
Tissues all around
A quilt upon clustered knees
Whispers penetrate
The dialogue every minute
As the girls all fidget
And pass the sweets around
To start this night long fest
Of movies
Crying
Tears
And sweets
All it takes if a few phone calls
Ushered in sobs and tears
For fellow sisters to hear
The call of need
With sleeping bags
Thrown around
And clocks all but forgotten
A day that was so rotten
Is quickly soon
Become all forgotten
Drowned in tears
Hugs
Movies
And chocolate cookies
To push the sorrows
Down and away
And a phone tree
To hear you when you sob
To understand you when you can’t speak at all
For all the sisters one and all
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Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 7:46 pm
dudes if you read this comment cause its been a month since i've posted this and its still o comments sooooooooo sad well this stinks like super alot gonk crying
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Posted: Sun Apr 08, 2007 5:06 pm
Meh... I've been away for so dang long!!! gonk Anyway, just read this today... I love it! As always! I love how you're relating these friends to cookies... Well... in a way... Beautifully written, I love it! As always, great job! biggrin I dunno Lyra, this may be one of the best you've posted... Maybe... ^^;
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Posted: Tue Jun 26, 2007 10:15 pm
the word cookies caught my eye, aww love teh poem, it sound reli good
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Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 11:27 am
I love this poem. It actually reminds me of me and my mother redface xp
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