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 Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 9:57 am
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2007 9:27 pm
Decided their Headliner show as too complex. The new one lets them both do something and is a simpler act. Also one that people would be more willing to watch.
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Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2008 6:33 pm
*tries to keep her girls' idea alive*
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Posted: Tue Feb 26, 2008 5:11 pm
Ooh, I really love this concept! I'm an identical twin, so this is really cool for me to read. I can't think of anything right now to suggest, but if something hits me, I'll let you know!
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Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2008 3:18 pm
Thanks! The only curse is I have to get two character slots because they are "seperate" people technically. So it will take me awhile to get them. I'm trying to come up with more description for them.
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Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 3:44 pm
Ok then! After some great inspiration, I've revamped their Stage 3 performance and fleshed out their history. I'd like some more critques please! heart
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Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 4:01 pm
Okay, I really love the tweaks you've made. I love that the twins sing a duet at the end of their act. However, perhaps they can adjust the act for the place they're performing it in? It'd be cool to see a bit of variety, so you're not just posting the same show over and over. Maybe a comedy act of some kind?
Also, the history is really great. However, since it's rather close to modern day, why were the two not separated? Especially if the father was so ashamed. Wouldn't he have been searching for a way to make them normal? Does the mother object over personal reasons? Or is there a real medical risk to do so?
Also, why were they turned away from so many circuses? It seems plausible that one would be interested. Were they too young?
Just some things to ponder. I really love the idea of them. <33
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Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 4:09 pm
Okies!
Yeah the act can get old, it's just the best idea I have right now. I'll come up with more acts later.
I have the reason for the lack of seperation in the condition post but I'll stick it in the history too. Some very important blood vessels and part of their spinal cords are connected. They'd either bleed to death, or if they survived the surgery, they would be paralysed. Neither is a good option.
Why they were turned away is stated in the history and in the conditions post. Once people realised how humiliated and abused most "side show freaks" were it was outlawed. All circuses got ride of them. Even today they don't have "real" conjoined twins. They are considered disabled citizens and live on government funding. However their lack of education made it so the girls didn't know that.
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Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 4:11 pm
I see. Awesome!! Sounds good. I can't really think of any other suggestions. =3
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