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Bythe's Lament (poem)

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Cinnestur
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 3:08 am


Bythe is the actual name of the Thin Man in the official RP, here is a glimpse into his past. Tell me what you think.

Bythe's lament

Long ago, and far away, in a cottage by the sea.
I loved and wed my goddess who Soman called Cerillie.

The snow would fall and the wind would howl, but always warm to me.
Was my cottage small, my trappings quaint, and the arms of Cerillie.

One winter's night as she lie sleeping, sleeping next to me.
A chill crept through my window, and took my Cerillie.

My Cerillie. My Cerillie. In my cottage by the sea.
It took my life. It took my love. It took my Cerillie.
PostPosted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 8:41 pm


Wait a minute... this sounds vaguely simialar to something I think Edgar Allan poe wrote...
The demons came from the Sea
And took my Annabell Lee

Baulder


Cinnestur
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 12:53 am


Aye, inspired by Poe. He is my favourite poet of all time, all of my poetry follows his style.
PostPosted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 8:17 pm


Aah, I myself am quite a fan of the story of Amontillado.

Baulder


Dragoni Dracowing
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 11:41 pm


The Raven is mine.
PostPosted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 11:12 am


You mean the Nevermore one?

Baulder


Dragoni Dracowing
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 6:10 pm


Yup.
PostPosted: Tue May 08, 2007 9:47 pm


XD I caught the Poe commonality too. Very good poet he was

Your poem I thought though, was actually pretty good. Keep working at em ya ^^

Yaoiman


lakita_phoenix

PostPosted: Sun Jul 06, 2008 10:03 pm


hm. i've heard a lot about Poe, but never actually read his work. I blame my aunt; she exposed me to Shakespeare & John Steinbeck since i was four years old, so i tend to read them more often than other writers. sweatdrop
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