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 Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 7:48 pm
Alright, this is an old one that i put up a long time ago for a contest. I know it is kinda crappy, but i made it up on the spot so, it is as good as my limited ability would allow.
Ahem!
If ever there was a more perfect curse,
please tell me i would like to hear
of days gone by when you stopped to think
"This curse fulfills me more than drink"
Do not shed wanton tears,
for You shall enjoy yourself for years
age untold by looks by face,
the celebration of death
In our flashing fangs reflected.
Dancing a way around this circle
but missing the final step,
eternal life is but a curse
that I can easily live with
Let yourself go
enjoy your sin,
None hold power over us.
We are the creatures of the night
Now let us have our prey by right.
hehe, fun stuff eh? Go ahead! Tear it apart!
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Posted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 11:04 am
I like this poem. Maybe its too raw and real for me yto criticze.
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