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 Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 9:34 am
Here is the book that I am writing. I'm going to do a couple paragraphs at a time so that it is easier to read. Apocalypse
The Dawning
Chapter 1 ...In the beginning, the Gods created everything. They even created the Demi-God, which governs the life on Earth. His name is Granfaldx. Once this was brought about, they decided to watch how everything unfolded. The Hierarchy, who had power over all the Demi-Gods, served under the Gods’ orders. Their job was to do as the gods wished, watch over all the land and grant power to those who they found deserved it. ...One person who was chosen to have these powers was Legion. But Legion had not been given a special talent to make art, nor to create machine. No, he was given something quite more powerful, and darker than that. His power is the power to kill. He was granted the power to kill without punishment by the gods themselves, and this power was irreversible. Only he could stop himself, but he wouldn’t do that even if his life depended on it. Being empowered with darkness was one of the greatest things that could ever happen to him in his mind. He was basically given the power to do anything. Who might have given him such a thing, you may ask? None other than Lucifer himself. ...Among Granfaldx’s first creations was one named Kain. He too was given the power to kill without consequence. Granfaldx created this soul in efforts to counterbalance Legion, though they were both governed under the element of darkness. Now, such beings who were governed under light and dark were given labels. Granfaldx himself named the light ones Divine Beings. The dark ones were labeled Demonic Beings. (Now, there are different classes of Divine and Demonic Beings, but you shall have knowledge of them later on.) Such things impressed The Gods. No other Demi-God had thought of a Hierarchy for mortals. ...Now, Legion was in fact genetically created. He and his brother cared for each other very much. But little did they know their parents were of different races. Their mother was a pureblooded Divine Being, while their father was a pure Demonic Being. As we already know, Legion was one of the first of his kind. By the time he was one hundred winters old, he discovered this gift-and his darkness… and his parents’ secret. Hatred grew in his soul. Thus, he fled to the mortal realm in efforts to escape his fears. Lucifer did not approve of this. In ripping a hole between realms, Demons could freely pour through to the mortal realm. In seeing this, Granfaldx allowed one of his creations to tear a hole. Forthwith, both realms were balanced. ...This balance continued throughout the years, until one of Granfaldx's creations figured out how to create a realm of its own. With this newfound power, it created the Nega-realm. A realm of different properties, which not even the Demi-God had knowledge of. In it, time went 100 times slower, and all colors were reversed. Inside, he was able to create his own civilization, and, in turn, was considered a god himself. The great ruler of this place stayed in here for thousands of years, and worked himself to become the ultimate being. He threatens Legion and Kain's existence, and plots to overthrow the Demi-God’s army.
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 7:22 pm
I ain't gonna lie here, I'm impressed. I hope you don't stop, it's good so far.
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Monkeyinafryingpan Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 4:41 pm
Once created, the Nega-Realm cannot be destroyed, nor altered in any way. Most of the inhabitants were of an aggressive nature, and were stronger than most Angels and Demons. Knowledge of such a civilization would horrify the Hierarchs. But, not a soul knew of the Nega-Realm. Well, The Gods and those who inhabit the realm did, but that goes without saying.
If you need a better picture of the Nega-Realm, just imagine your whole world upside down, and then fill it with thousands of horrible beings ruled by a single king. This “king” is unstoppable to anyone, especially because that’s the way that he built his people. You could challenge him if you wanted, but you would be lower on the scale than a rag doll to him. If he wanted to, he could kill you instantly, but he doesn’t, because he needs you to build upon his own existence and make him seem better than what he really is though he already is stronger than anything you have ever encountered. This unseeable world is filled with terror, much like in Hell; yet there is a strange sense in it, that you are
safe.
With this new faction in tow, there are three powers that are destined to clash at one point or another. This tale will be the narrative to that battle, which takes place over more years than you can count in ten of your lifetimes, but will be ended before you know it. Nega, Dark, and Light. All three are dangerous in their own ways when they are separate, but together, they are unstoppable by anything, especially the humans, who are just puppets in this enormous plot that shall some day ensue.
And so… the tale begins…
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 6:56 am
Chapter 2
The monster was on him almost immediately. It looked like a twisted version of a hyena with long sharp fangs and claws for tearing off flesh. A disfigured arm landed on the young Legion’s shoulder. Legion, being a black-haired pale Demon, slid not too far from his position. With little effort, he met the blow of the beast’s next savage attack with his fist. The beast shrieked as the arm of Legion tore through the limb of the other. The arm of the monster looked as if it were split in three sections. It was heavily bruised, and blood was everywhere on the ground. Licking the excess blood off of his arm, Legion looked down upon the sprawled body of the monster.
What happened next startled Legion. The creature let out a howl that sounded of a human’s cry and a rabbit’s scream in one. Something ticked in Legion’s brain. He vigorously turned his head to his right. Five of the beasts were in a stalking position, claws scraping at the stone ground. The landscape around them was gray and black. The clouds overhead formed in gray clumps. Not hesitating, Legion calmly walked forward, intimidating the creatures. At this, they began to back up a few steps, not quite sure what to think of Legion as of this point.
With bared teeth, and outstretched claws, the monsters leapt at the emotionless Legion. With one swipe, he took out three of the beasts, the other two ripping and biting at him. A dark blade materialized in his hand. At seeing this, the last two creatures attempt to flee, yipping out in fear. At what seemed to be the speed of sound, Legion swung the blade at the two, their flesh flying everywhere. Legion’s raven black hair covered his face. The blade dematerialized instantly afterward. He let out a few heavy breaths of exhaustion.
He ignored the blood on him, paying more attention to the fact that he had killed. Legion slowly put his right bloodstained hand over his face. A smile then came to him, and he almost seemed to laugh silently.
“Heh… That was almost too easy,” he snickered to himself, and then began walking
away slowly, leaving behind the bodies of the beasts to be devoured by the fellow Scavengers. Such putrid beasts; they barely deserved to live, yet he knew their importance in the world, much like his own. To kill; but was that all? No. He was meant for something much higher up on the scale, but he wouldn’t let anyone besides himself know that. Not even the one he was destined to meet with.
He walked, so ever uncaring of the things that he had just done. Sounds of thunder could be heard in the distance. Legion turned his head to face the sounds, wondering about why he was being attacked by the Demons. Maybe it was because he tore the hole between realms? It would only make sense. He looked back ahead of himself, still walking. He had forgotten why he had done that. He had forgotten everything about his past, for that matter. Legion strained his thoughts. Whispers of something echoed in his mind. Trying to grasp the sound, he concentrated harder. It remained the same. At this, he got angry. Legion kicked a nearby rock. No matter what he did, he could not remember anything before opening the gate. Something had in fact made him angry. He wanted to know what.
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Monkeyinafryingpan Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 7:23 pm
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 3:18 pm
That's it. You shall have to wait until it comes out. I don't want anyone to rip me off and copy it so that they can get money on it before me. Sorry.
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 3:19 pm
Monkeyinafryingpan I ain't gonna lie here, I'm impressed. I hope you don't stop, it's good so far. How was the fight scene?
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Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 4:17 pm
I like, although a little more detail would be nice, but again, not a bad start.
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Monkeyinafryingpan Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Apr 07, 2007 7:40 am
I don't think I have the patience to write a book.......
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Posted: Sun Apr 08, 2007 8:35 am
Monkeyinafryingpan I like, although a little more detail would be nice, but again, not a bad start. Could you be more specific as to what to add more detail to?
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Posted: Tue Jun 26, 2007 5:43 pm
You are doing very well! I tried writing a book a while ago... I have lots of ideas, and can't put them together the right way...
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Posted: Wed Dec 12, 2007 1:51 am
to be honest, the Nega-realm reminds me of Sailor Moon and the Nega-force xd
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