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 Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 6:48 pm
Hey love, hey baby boy
You happy now? Did sucking me dry of joy taste good?
Did you have fun ******** that other girl when I was sick over you?
Did my name pop to your head when she started licking your neck?
You know you’ll never have anything like me again
You know that no matter how many girls you ******** I’ll be the one who was right
You know that you’ll always be guilty
Hey honey, hey sweet
You feel like a king now? Did you have fun fooling around between the sheets with her?
Did you have fun being seen around that other girl?
Did you have fun being beat up by my almost brothers when they saw you kissin’ that girl?
You know you’ll never have anything like me again
You know you screwed up and that the one you screwed over was best you were going to have in a long time
You know you’ll feel shamefaced every time you ******** another girl
Hey cutie, hey heart
You proud now? Did you think you had the lie down to an art?
Did you forget how I could make you cry too?
Did you have fun seeing me with the other boy, not giving a s**t about you?
You know you’ll never have anything like me again
You know you’re officially screwed now that I’m gone
You know that you’re forgotten and you don’t matter anymore
You know you had me and you lost me…
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 3:34 pm
wow, I love this. If you came up with this, Kudos 10 fold for you. I recently had a relationship like this, although he didnt have sex with other girls stare if this is a song or you got this from somewhere, pm me where it is lol. Nicely done.
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Posted: Thu Mar 29, 2007 8:19 pm
I wrote it, lol, for it to be considered song material is awesome sweatdrop
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Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 11:05 am
Nawesome.
That's all I can say for it!
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Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 7:43 pm
>.<
wow this poem/song just...wow...it's obvious what you wrote it for, but also I can totally connect with that!!!
and go you for being able to write those feelings of anger and hurt and pure ANGER!!!!! in such a great way.
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Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 8:10 pm
Sl!t Nawesome.
That's all I can say for it!
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Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2007 8:11 pm
MollyFlogginz >.< wow this poem/song just...wow...it's obvious what you wrote it for, but also I can totally connect with that!!! and go you for being able to write those feelings of anger and hurt and pure ANGER!!!!! in such a great way.
Thank you!
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Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 2:22 pm
There's definitely a lot of raw anger in there, but it's not exactly a well-written poem. Emotionally overwhelming, yes, but it lacks rhythm and seems forced. It would probably be excellent as prose, though.
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Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 8:36 pm
Thank you! sweatdrop *sigh* something to work from, thank you again!
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