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 Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 10:55 pm
Okay.
Seeing as I am getting absolutely zero help in the GazettE no Yakuza guild, I have decided to ask people that I believe will actually assist me.
Seeing as I am a big GazettE fan, I've started to write a fanfic.
I'm going to post it on the web because I think it's rather quite good.
But I'm still new at this so, seeing as I'm a bit of a perfectionist when it comes to some things, I want it to be good.
I've already got Sai Sai helping me, but when she gets on she can't stay on long enough to thoroughly help me on this matter. So I need more assistance.
(do I have to bribe people with cookies for help, or what??)
I'll even take suggestions for parts of my story from people who provide me with at least some assistance.
That means, my fellow loft dwellers, if you help me I might put in some little cameos(if it fits with the scene), or for those that help me out a lot and atually like my fanfic, I might put a certain couple together.
but please, I need help.
Yay-ness!
I've finally got it on teh web!
I decided to go with Roanoko's suggestion of Within These Pages
(Sankyuu~)
But now it ish on teh web for critiquing.
Just don't be to harsh, keep in mind that I'm new. sweatdrop
But yessh.
It's not all on there.
Because Grinnie likes tormenting people who like her work. >D
But yes, It's up. Ready to be hated. Or loved. Whichever you choose.
(I actually couldn't care less if I was reading a mary-sue as long as the writing and story was good, so that's what I was going for in here. Good writing and story, the characters just happened to be who they are...And I know that it starts off a little bad, It gets better. I promise!)
Grinn-grinn, out!
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Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 11:06 pm
Okay.
Let's see.Quote: It all begins when Reita discovers a very mysterious author and starts reading her books and then meets her in a bookstore one day when he was hanging out with his bandmates in the shopping district(no duh). The mystrious author seems malicious and evil at first, but soon grows on the members of the GazettE. As they become closer friends they find out about her horrible past and her problems with trust and love. As she and Ruki become closer friends, he finds himself wondering if she could ever love someone again, and starts to wonder why he's thinking these ******** it.
That plot is trashed.
It's still generally the same, but I've dropped some of it...
I think it's better that way.
From "It" to "GazettE" I've kept but the rest is out the window.
But I'm keeping Yumei's shitty past.
Because she can't be perfect...that would just ruin the story.
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Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 9:17 am
I'd just be careful because a lot of people might think its a self insertion fic, or a mary sue, and fandom generally doesn't take too kindly to such things.
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Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 3:48 pm
Sai-kun I'd just be careful because a lot of people might think its a self insertion fic, or a mary sue, and fandom generally doesn't take too kindly to such things. It's not. I base my characters off people I know, but they're still way different. So I am being careful. But thank you for the warning, anyway! ^^
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Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 6:12 pm
grinnie Sai-kun I'd just be careful because a lot of people might think its a self insertion fic, or a mary sue, and fandom generally doesn't take too kindly to such things. It's not. I base my characters off people I know, but they're still way different. So I am being careful. But thank you for the warning, anyway! ^^ That was my first thought, "another Mary-sue." Do take caution with this sort of thing. As far as pairings go, I can't offer much advice. I don't know much about Gazette to begin with XD. If you want to send me your fanfic and have me read over it, I can do spelling and grammer cheks. Maybe as the plot progresses I might have an idea to help you with. But i'm willing to help if you want it.
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Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 6:31 pm
RoanokoDarkHeart grinnie Sai-kun I'd just be careful because a lot of people might think its a self insertion fic, or a mary sue, and fandom generally doesn't take too kindly to such things. It's not. I base my characters off people I know, but they're still way different. So I am being careful. But thank you for the warning, anyway! ^^ That was my first thought, "another Mary-sue." Do take caution with this sort of thing. As far as pairings go, I can't offer much advice. I don't know much about Gazette to begin with XD. If you want to send me your fanfic and have me read over it, I can do spelling and grammer cheks. Maybe as the plot progresses I might have an idea to help you with. But i'm willing to help if you want it. thank you so much! I knew that I would get help here. I have the main pairing set, the others are just for people that help me a lot and think they'd make a good couple. So thank you very, very much!^^
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Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 5:54 pm
I have to admit, I thought the same thing as well. ^^;
[Note to anyone who DOES write Mary-sues: To be brutally honest, no one else on the internet wants to read a fic about you being together with [insert J-Rocker/Anime character/etc here], so please keep it to yourself.]
I don't know too terribly much about Gazette either, but I guess I can help look it over and such. If you're placing them in a non-fictional setting, I might be able to help you research the place.
For example, "She and Ruki went shopping in Tokyo", "She and Ruki went shopping in Shibuya", or even "She and Ruki went shopping in Harajuku" isn't quite as realistic or detailed as "She and Ruki went shopping on Takeshita-dori in Harajuku". See what I mean?
Of course, this means nothing if you've got them somewhere fictional. ^^;;;
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Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 6:08 pm
sorry i'm not on for long grinn crying
i'll help as much as i can though ^^
you can trust sai's word~
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Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 8:19 pm
VampireShinigami I have to admit, I thought the same thing as well. ^^; [Note to anyone who DOES write Mary-sues: To be brutally honest, no one else on the internet wants to read a fic about you being together with [insert J-Rocker/Anime character/etc here], so please keep it to yourself.]
I don't know too terribly much about Gazette either, but I guess I can help look it over and such. If you're placing them in a non-fictional setting, I might be able to help you research the place. For example, "She and Ruki went shopping in Tokyo", "She and Ruki went shopping in Shibuya", or even "She and Ruki went shopping in Harajuku" isn't quite as realistic or detailed as "She and Ruki went shopping on Takeshita-dori in Harajuku". See what I mean? Of course, this means nothing if you've got them somewhere fictional. ^^;;; woot! I LOVE you guys so much! Thank you vampi, I'll come to you for any research in the future! And Sai: It's okay. You help me when you get on, and that's grand! So don't worry! ^^
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Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 6:37 pm
NOTICE:
All work on my fanfic, still untitled, has stopped due to s**t going on in my life.
Work will continue as soon as everything gets back on track.
Thank you all for your help so far, I'm extremely grateful.
I don't know how long I'll be emotionally numb, so please be patient.
Thank you, again. Okay.
Well.
Grinnie apparently got back into it sooner than she expected.
So, ignore that last part.
^^
I guess that I'm healed enough...
Must've been the fact I was blaring GazettE in my headphones at night.
But anyway.
Grinnie's back to working on the fanfic!^^
heart heart heart ~Grinnie
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Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2007 4:04 am
Also, Grinnie has updated post two!
v^-^;;
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Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2007 10:19 pm
UPDATE!!!!!
Dundundun!!
The love triangle has just been revealed!!
8D
Things are gonna heat up soon!!
I can smell it!!
Or is that my steamed pork bun?
I don't know, but one thing's for sure!!
I'm gonna finish this thing if it's the last thing I do!!
Gawd, I can't wait to get everything confirmed and on the web!!
Stay tuned, Bishes!!
8D
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