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aliira >> Ooh~ Thank you so much for the comment.

I just updated the edit XD

Eejbeej >> Thank you~ heart
Yes, it disappeared when I cleaned it up with brightness/contrast. It's actually there in the real pic XD

The chest area is awkward, try looking in the mirror how your armpit looks aspecialy. I think the shadows by the armpit and on the neck have too much of a strong edge too. I like your shading!

Did you use a refference or no?

I have a few points [I hope you are not offended by my manner of speach, or soemthing like that...here are some stuff I found and thought I could fix]

1.
Her neck was too thick, so I made it a bit thinner. All in all, I am not sure the human neck can go that far back, you should try it, women are more flexible then men, sooo..i might be wrong..lol
2.
Her ribcage was a bit out of place, everytime you draw soemthing, try to draw the shape of the ribcage inside the body. Did you draw the body under her dress? Because I found it a bit too long.
3.
I put in as much detail as I could in the armpit, I am not 100% sure how the muscle works there, but what I meant is you could try to put your arm that way, just to see how the muscles are connected there.
4.
I fixed [as far as i know..lol] some other minor things, you can see it all in the drawover...I hope it helps!

haha...yeah, I imagined razz

Thing is, it is all sortof in the same proportion there. I mean, if one thing is 25% longer, everything else in the body is the same, so when soemthing is 25% longer and soething is 10% longer, and soemthing else is 40% longer it looks a bit weird :S.

There was a ctualy an artist in the Renaissance who painted elongated figures...hehe

I have a siggestion, when you draw these things, always draw the spine rib cage and the hips. The distance between last rib and hips is about 4-5 fingers usualy, that way it will be easier to get the big proportions right. Also, I hate the armpit...it is so complex..lol

And I envy you razz I wish I could bend my neck that way...lol...I feel my skin is gonna rip if I do that XD

Glad I helped biggrin

Ozzy, it's alright to give positive comments in here, but please give reasons as to why you think its pretty, to show you've at least thought about it and to help the artist out so they know what they are probably doing right. It's just more helpful to everyone when you post more than one line.