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 Posted: Thu Mar 20, 2008 10:27 pm
oh please...
I'd say its only a change of writing style, here its more adventurous and in the others its more dramatic/fantasy. It all depends on what you feel like writing and atm you seem to be wanting a little adventure/dramatic in my opinion. Either way your writing is awesome!
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Posted: Fri Mar 21, 2008 11:40 am
I'm still saying it was better. Some of it was a little cliched and lame, and I need to revise plot details, but my imagery was better then, and my style was stronger and flowed better.
Now I'm too real-world. I wanna go back.... After I finished this book, it was the ebst. That's when I had just started Ametris, and it was the ebst of two worlds; I had discovered a new world and knew that I had the ability to write it down.
*sigh*
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Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2008 1:34 pm
I finished reading it and I gotta say its the type of adventuristic/fairy tale that I've always dreamed of, the plotline was great and funny as well! I really enjoyed it. The last chapter at the end had some good wisdom at the end regarding change and patience. I gotta hand it to yeh kirbs you really made a good book here!
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Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2008 5:39 pm
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Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2008 10:02 pm
yeh ever since I was a little kid I always loved the sword type fantasy with castles and sorts this was great I really did enjoy it!
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Posted: Mon Mar 31, 2008 8:22 pm
neaaattt.
I think if someone pokes me, I will end up rewriting it. Just because I want to show it in a more focused light, give it a little more realism. But it won't replace thsi one. I like simple things.
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