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Illuminate Izzie

PostPosted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 3:54 pm


heart Hello I'm new to this guild and I don't know who even sent me that message to join. sweatdrop In any case, this seems like a great guild and here is a poem I wrote. It's not too long and I don't think it's that great considering that is was one of my first ones, but here it is!

By day she is happy and cheerful,
By night she is gloomy and dead,
The thing she's hiding makes her fearful,
So she lays in bed,
Hoping that a better day,
Will come her way,
She doesn't speak about the thing,
She doesn't want anyone to know,
Yet she is happy enough to sing,
Even out in the snow,
She is that confused little girl,
In the big open world. heart
PostPosted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 9:21 pm


Heh. Cute. The rythm seems weird, but other than that not bad. Of course, I'm horrible at poetry myself so I probably shouldn't be talking sweatdrop

Oh, and welcome to the guild biggrin

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