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 Posted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 6:07 pm
There i laid as darkness surrounded me. Blood Dripped form my lip where i tried to escape. Suddenly yellows eyes appeared sucking the life force from me, and from that moment, i relized, i was, passing... away....
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Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 11:53 pm
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Posted: Thu Feb 22, 2007 5:14 pm
I like it did you write that?
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Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 5:53 am
omg i love it.it's kinda deep.well at least for me.ur really good post something else <3
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Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 2:26 pm
It's nothing.
It has no value, it's completely ambiguous, it's not even poetry or respectable prose. How can it be deep? There's no subject, it's like a dead quote from a pretentious airhead. I expected there to be more after I finished reading that.
How can you people praise this lukewarm bile?
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 3:30 pm
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