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hardkoreUSMC
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Thu Feb 08, 2007 10:55 am


Chapters of "Foreign Opposition"

Here is my giant fic i made awhile back. Y'all might find it to y'alls liking if you like action, yautja (predators), aliens, marines, war like violence....etc.
PostPosted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 10:50 am


frakk it, i'll post my chapters here...

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CHAPTER ONE
"Damn... you said they were only SEVEN AND A HALF feet tall!"
Sergeant Michel's Reaction When He Saw a Female Predator

After the engagements at the Sector Tango Romeo, a small desert planet teeming with large monstrous creatures and huge ominous canyons, the Twentieth Armored Division arrived and established a heavily armed garrison there. The Division had approximately 50 M3-A2 Heavy Tanks, 100 light armored reconnaissance patrol vehicles or LARPV, 30 self-propelled artillery pieces, 40 amphibious transports, and 15 heavily armed rocket carriers capable of SAM ability, and not to mention air/space support and barrage. If they needed re-enforcements, then several LAT-50 Airborne light tanks will be dropped from high altitude, while landing craft containing the M10 heavy land raider assault vehicles landed in a secure LZ (landing zone). The Division was renown for its ability to be both flexible for blitzkrieg, and stiff for just blowing the place to hell. The Division's Command Position was transferred to Maynard as he was promoted to Brigadier General for his ability to deal with hostile unknown forces in STR and to bring one back alive.


"Zero five hundred hours right about...now!" said Gunnery Sergeant Highway signaling when the first recon of an unexplored canyon area located twenty clicks north-northeast to the fortress would begin.
"Sergeants, move your vehicles out, follow my lead. Ten yard spread double columns. MOVE OUT!"
There are six M3-A2s in this patrol. Normally they would send in the LARPVs to recon the area, but limited satellites reveal that unknown alien vessels have landed in a clearing in the mountains. The team would have aerospace barrage support if needed, but further re-enforcements would be impossible and risky. So that's why they are sending a squad of "heavies" to patrol.
"Remember, commanders that were are to use deadly force as I see fit. The aliens that we may encounter have been known to kill humans for sport, but don't be afraid. Simply show the amount of firepower you posses and give them the lines y'all have been instructed to say, and they hopefully will cooperate; that is saying that you encounter anything. " Announced Maynard over the comm.
The squad moved out. They ran through a series of passes and valleys to the coordinates. The terrain was generally arid, sort of like the plains of Russia, with large grass steppes, and massive rock formations. It sort of brings back a sense of a peaceful summer afternoon in Texas. The squad stopped 20 miles from location to eat breakfast.
"So X MAN (the nickname given to Lance Corporal Xavier), did you hear about that one time my friend ran into these things that were about to encounter?" Asked Highway
"Nope, can't say I have!" replied Xavier
"Well, I'll tell you all about it, then. The things that were dealing against are what we call Predators. Even the Predators consider themselves that. They think they are, from people who have experienced their culture, the bad-asses of the universe. They stand on average about 2 or more meters tall. I've even heard the females are larger than the males. Their skin is yellow, green, brown, white, or a mixture of and molted with speckles. The faces are distinguishable by for large mandibles that have a tusk on the end, the two lower ones run vertical as the top two run horizontal. Below is their pink mouth with a few sharp teeth. Their hair is thick, kinda like dread locks that are twisted and have metal ringlets all over them. The hands and feet have sharp talons. And the two most distinguishing feature in my opinion that will save your life is that their blood is a glowing green that you can see in the dark. Second, I think they can see more than one type of light with their masks on. Other than all that, that's all I know."
"How do they reproduce, if they have eggs like the bugs do, well then we can get an edge that way." Stated PFC McClane
"They reproduce the same ways as us. s**t, I even heard that the females can even throw their mate during sex." Chuckled Highway
"Where did they come from?" questioned McClane
"For all I know they been out in this region for centuries. I hope we find their home worlds, and fast!"
"And fast? Why?" asked Xavier
"Because if we go to war with these guys, I want to be the first to hit their soil." Stated Highway


After they got done eating, the columns moved out. They had gone a total of six hours five minutes when the lead tank reported in
"Unknown at eleven o' clock sir!"
"Stay on course sergeant!" said Highway in a commanding tone
The Predator jumped off the ridge and landed on the lead tank. The crew in the turret heard the boom of him landing.
"All vehicles halt!" said Highway
The squad halted. The Predator that was on the tank had its invisibility on. It crouched down and looked at the massive armored vehicles the humans were driving. It just stood there, looking at the patrol
"What do we do sir?" asked the Lead Tank Commander
"Just a minute sergeant." Spoke Highway consulting his standing orders from the consol. It read:
1. Engage only when threatened.
2. Preferably Diplomacy to Hostility
3. Be hospitable, even if it is a pain in the a**.
"Try going up on top for a conversation. If he tries anything bad we'll clean him off for you with the ripper guns." Said Highway in a reassuring manner.
The hatch made a small creaking noise, and then the sergeant opened the hatch slightly and slowly, trying not to make any sudden moves that would provoke the creature. He opened it enough to see the Predators invisible outline. Then it turned the invisibility off, its massive brown feet in front of the sergeant's face. He slowly continued to open the hatch until he his head was completely uncovered. He slowly stood up, stopping when his upper torso was out. The creature just stood there. It looked at him with a mask on its face.
"Uh sir, it's just looking at me."
" I'll do something that will make you feel better. But you need to get out of the turret have a chit chat with him." Said Highway
The sergeant looked at the other tanks. They main turrets rotated until they pointed at the Predator. Then the commanders of each tank popped out of the turret and manned the .60 HMG. They aimed them at the Predator. It looked around to see the commotion. The sergeant placed his arms on the edge and pushed himself to where he was sitting on the top of the turret and on the edge of the hatch. The Predator slowly moved over to the hatch and looked inside. The crewmembers all looked behind their shoulders to the alien taking a peek.
"Sir I think it might want a ride." Said the Sergeant
"Let it sit inside the turret, to the left of the breach were there is extra room." Said Highway
The sergeant then pulled the rest of his body out of the tank, and held his hand out, pointing inside the tank. He motioned the Predator to get in. It looked at him, looked back at the others, and then slowly tried to get in.


He sat in an observation seat inside the turret to the left of the breach. His legs were too long, so the loader pulled the seat all the way down, as if someone was going to layback. It sat at the upper chest area of the seat with its legs moderately bent. The loader motioned it to use the periscope to look outside with. The sergeant sat directly behind him in an elevated chair.
"Alright, keep on toward the objective. Remember, we want to take them all with us like that one we just picked up, so no itchy trigger fingers." Said Highway over the comm.
The gunner leaned over and lightly tapped the Predator on the shoulder. It looked at him as he pointed to his eyes, and then at the periscope. It looked at the scope, then placed it's eyes where they were supposed to go. The gunner tapped his shoulder one more time. The Predator looked at him.
"Close your ears." Said the gunner, putting his hands over his ears.
The Predator seemingly understood, as he put his hands over his ears as he looked through the periscope. At platoon of 30 xenomorphs appeared on the ridge. Deciding then to practice their main armaments, the loaders loaded an HE shell into their 210mm main guns. The gunner rotated the turret toward the swarm, and awaited the order.
"FIRE AT WILL!" ordered Highway


The whole tank shook briefly but violently, as huge orange streaks flew at the swarm. First there was a group as bugs, and then there was a huge dust cloud and fireball. Two of the bugs actually managed to make it out alive, with enough aggression to still charge the tanks. The machine gunners all opened up, leaving giant acid splats in the ground. What was left of the group were several smoking craters, no acid left! The Predator looked over to the loader, who pulled the switch that opened the breach. A giant smoking shell casing flew out and into the auto-eject. The gunner slid over toward the Predator and signaled him if he wanted to try. The Predator took his hands off his ears, and then crawled over to the gunner position. He kept his thumb near the trigger button, and did the same motion as before with the eyes. It hunched forward and took a look as it aimed at the area where the previous shots were fired and pressed the button, but nothing happened! The gunner tapped his shoulder and signaled him to wait. The Predator looked at the loader. The loader grabbed another HE round and loaded it into the chamber, flipping the switch that closes the breach, then giving the thumbs up sign for all go. Responding with his own thumbs up, the gunner then patted the shoulder and took off is headset's earmuffs. He gave it to the Predator, which kind of knew by now what to expect. He slid them over his own ears and looked at the gunner. The gunner gave him thumbs up, which guessed that that meant OK. He peered threw the sights and pressed the button. BOOM! A giant concussion moved through the tank, making it rock back. The shell flew and hit the same spot where the rest of them hit. It made a large flame followed by a lot of dirt.
"Heh heh heh." Said the Predator through the mask. It mandibles clacked as he said that.
"Bugs sir," the gunner spoke to Highway through the radio, "What the hell are bugs doing here?"
"I can answer that, the Predator supposedly release bugs into the wild so that they may form a hive. The Preds then hunt the hive." Highway replied


The Squad moved stopped for lunch. They had been taking it slow and cautious the entire way. All the crews sat on top their tanks with their MREs in their hands. Happily eating and joking in the spare time they had. The sergeant sat by the Predator, who was looking down at his scars he had on hands. He looked up see the sergeant offering him a stick of beef jerky. The Predator took the stick, set it on his leg, and then pulled out an air hose that was connected to his mask. Highway walked over to see the guest as he was dissembling it. Highway sat in front of the Predator and watched as it took off its mask. Its face was brown and speckled, like the rest of its body. Its mandibles twitching slightly. Highway stared at its yellowish-tented eyes, which were shrouded by the bowl head. It looked down at the piece of jerky, picked it up, and took a large bite. Highway walked and scooted in front of the Predator, Predator wasn't paying attention.
"I believe we haven't been properly introduced, I'm Gunnery Sergeant Highway." Said Highway
The Predator looked at him and said nothing. It only continued to stare. The gunny remembers that what Maynard had instructed him to do, which was point at him and say his name slow. That was one way to start talking.
The gunny pointed at himself and said "Gunny", Gunn-eee"
The Predator finished the last bite of the jerky, swallowed, and then sat Indian style on the tank. Made a clicking noise in his throat, then tried to say the gunny's name "gunnee".
"That's right, I'm Highway. Now what's your name?" Highway pointed at him.
The Predator replied in a chirpish tone "Na'rik-de"
"Well now that we are introduced Nareekday, where are you from here on this planet?" Highway asked as he motioned at his comrades as a whole, and pointed toward the south where the Fort was. He then pointed to Na'rik-de, who pointed off to the north.
"Oh good then we are going that direction anyways." Said Highway


Ten minutes later the column was moving again, this time they were following a ridge that snaked along a large river. Na'rik-de was sitting in the commander's seat in Highway's tank this time. He was looking out and pointing the way to a place only he seemed to know at the time. The column drove on for about thirty minutes when they came to a large clearing in the ridge. There was a large and sparkling lake; one of those kinds that seem like a mirage seen by a parched man in the desert. There were several desert trees, all shaped like palm trees. Blossoming and blooming with brilliant red and blue fruits that hung at the top near the bright green leaves. However, through all these natural beauties lied something that the Marines did not expect to find; a village!

"Holy s**t!" said Highway
The village consisted of twelve medium sized structures of varying heights and sizes, all made of scrap metal, wood and rock. What was even more surprising and unexpected was the inhabitants. They are all Predator! As the column drove in to the village, Na'rik-de hopped out of the cockpit of the tank and stood on top of the turret.
" All vehicles halt!" ordered Highway
All the tanks halted fifty yards from the nearest structure. Highway's command tank continued to slowly drive in toward what appeared to be the town square. Several smaller Predator children suddenly ran to see the giant human vehicle driving through the town. The tank stopped dead when it was in the middle of the opening. Na'rik-de hopped of the tank and was greeted by all the Predator youth. The Predator youth were all mainly either yellow-green or light brown. They all varied in heights from four foot to six and were a mix of male and females. They all surrounded Na'rik-de and started to openly communicate in their own language. It sounded like a large mix of gurgling words and chirps that were unrecognizable to the tankers.
Highway got halfway out of the tank when he saw three taller figures walking toward him. Two were the same size, and the third a solid foot taller than the others. Highway watched them as they approached him. None of them had masks on, their crab faces showing. The tallest one had from what Highway could see; a blue cloth covering what were probably breasts. He guessed that one was female, as it was also larger than the males. The female was lighter in color, and had a "not so mean" looking face as compared to the males. Highway radioed in to the other tanks.
"Highway to squad, turn your engines off."
The tanks all turned their engines off one after another, until only the children and commotion of the crowd could be heard. Highway looked at the trio that stood before him. He got all the way out of the turret, and sat on the edge of the tank. His head was dead even with the females.


"Uh, hi!" said Highway in an unsure manner.
"Welcome ooman, we have been expecting your arrival!" she said......IN ENGLISH!!
Highway was deeply perplexed and bewildered as to how, or why, a Predator could speak in English like that, but with an accent that wasn't too far off from theirs.
As Highway tried to hop off the tank, Ke'sar'di extended her arm and gently helped him off. She stood a staggering three feet taller than him. He looked up at her pale brown face, her red and gold eyes staring down. Like a gigantic guardian. She placed a hand on his shoulder and motioned him to start walking toward the largest structure in the village. He looks back at the other tanks. The crews were stretching their cramped muscles and walking about. The ones in Highways tank walked over to the Predator youth, who were, by now, going about on their business of playing, practicing etc. The men were meeting these youth. The youth stood maybe only a foot shorter than the tankers. Highway almost started to zone out, (the sight of the village, the children, they all seemed very serene, peaceful, almost like back home on Earth) when he heard Ke'sar'di's deep voice raise.
"This way, ooman." She said.
She led him to from what Highway could figure, a meeting room. The interior was dark and overly warm with a large table in the center with several stools surrounding. Sitting on these stools were six older male Predators. Their faces looked much more aged, more natural body designs on their heads. They all had metal ringlets in their hair, and several bore scars. All of them made chirping noises and clicking noises as the gunny walked in. One Predator stood and spoke.
"Grreeatingss ooman!" said the elder Predator
"This one appears to be the leader." Said Ke'sar'di leaving her hand on Highway's shoulder. The standing one looked at the others, who spoke with a gurgling sound mixed with alien words. All six of them nodded.


"Yoouu are leader?" asked the elder. His English seemed very basic
"Uhh, yes. I am the err...leader of those men outside." Replied Highway somewhat nervously trying to speak as simple as he could.
The elder again looked at the others. They chattered amongst themselves and then again nodded their heads at the one that was standing.
"What your name?" the elder asked
"Gunnery Sergeant Michael S. Highway." He replied. The elder looked perplexed, his mandibles twitching and clattering together.
"Errr... Gunny." Said Highway
"Guneee!" barked the elder
"What's your name?" asked Highway
The elder paused for a moment, looked down, looked up and then gave an answer.
"Le'ken'di." Replied the elder
"Uhh, it's a pleasure to meet you...whatever your name is." Said Highway
"Our village requires your assistance, my elder can explain better!" said Ke'sar'di in an urgent manner
"Help?"
"Yess!" replied Le'ken'di
"Whoa, first things first, how the hell did the bunch of you end up making a town on this barren rock?" he raised
"Many years ago, our ship crashed." Explained Ke'sar'di "Very few survived."
"Okay, go on."
"Other packs would not come for help, so we adapted and lived here." She explained "We raised our families to live here."
"But according to our records, another pack DID arrive, we encountered a group of xenomorphs outside your village"
"Oh those..."Ke'sar'di started, "Those escaped the holding cells in our ship when it crashed. I'm quite surprised that they haven't started a hive yet."
"But what I'm so curious is why you didn't ask for our help? Our kind more often than not helps those who ask politely." Highway states
"It part of code!" barked one of the elders back at him
"And how did your group here learn our language so damn well?" he asked raising one eyebrow.
"The honor for that would go to Ke'sar'di. She lived with your kind for many years." Explained Le'ken'di
"Cool...anyways, now that I'm more enlightened about your village we can get down to some business." He said
"Your team would be needed to help." Stated Ke'sar'di
"What sort of help do you need?" He replied
"Another race similar to yours is systematically killing off all of our males, those worthless PAUKS even killed some of my children!" Le'ken'di growled
"Are they human?" Highway asked
"Not ooman." Said Le'ken'di
"And they are killing your kind?"
"That's right." Said Ke'sar'di
"Hmmmm..." Highway put took his helmet off and scratched his buzzed blonde hair as he look at the ground. "And they can't be bugs?"
"What?" asked Le'ken'di. He looked at him perplexed. Titling his head to the side.
"You know, the ones that bite and claw."
"Mo kainde amedha." Barked the elder next to Le'ken'di
Highway stood for a minute while considering.
"Ok, sure, what do you need of me?" he asked
"More of your warriorss to guard the younglingss." Said Le'ken'di
"Uhhh...Ok, I guess I could either take them back to the base." Suggested Highway
"No take them away from here. They need our blooded warrior protection!" said Le'ken'di getting impatient
Highway looked down at the ground again, and scratched his shaved head.
"Well, the way I see it, you've got two options."
"Go on."
"I could take your children back with me to the fortress, which is heavily defended on all sides by large guns, and crack internal security teams. It has the fleet backing it up for support. That's one option."


Le'ken'di growled. He started to walk over toward Highway. Highway started to feel some sweat roll down his cheek. The elder looked immensely strong, and pissed.
"Or we could establish a field post here. Setting up guard towers on all flanks of the village. Daily around the clock patrol followed by construction of large walls of the surrounding terrain."
Le'ken'di stopped right in front of the gunny. He stood two feet taller than the man. He looked at Ke'sar'di and spoke.
"I don't want more my sucklingss to thei-de." Said Le'ken'di
"That's what I was keeping in mind when I gave those options." Responded Highway in a more serious, laying-down-the-rules tone.
Le'ken'di looked at Ke'sar'di, growled and then walked back to his chair at the table. Ke'sar'di glanced at him, and then knelt in front of Highway, she placed her hand on shoulder.
"I have three younglings, I don't want any to die!" she spoke with urgency in voice and her eyes piercing into Highways own.
"I realize that, and I'm merely giving my suggestion. I would send them with us. They would be more than well cared for at the fortress heavily defended on all sides and guarded by crack security teams." Highway assured.
"They will be safe?" asked Ke'sar'di
"Trust me, they will be with the Marines." reassured Highway in a righteous tone.
She smiled, top mandibles flaring wide. She stood, faced the consul of six and spoke.
"Our youth shall travel with the oomans."


"Man, these little youngster Predators are alright!" spoke Xavier
X-Man sat down on the ground next to a younger Predator. Its skin a yellow greenish, a few lightly speckled section here and there on his body.
"Hey little fella, want look inside the tank?" asked X-Man
The little Predator just stared in amazement at the tall human. Even though he only stood one foot above him. The creature's bottom mandibles were flaring as the top was resting. X-Man pointed at the tank, and then motioned for the young Predator to follow. It eagerly and closely followed him, obviously fascinated by him and the equipment. X-Man climbed on the tank, and signaled for the youngling to follow. It sprang up and landed next to him without effort!
"Hey, that's a neat trick!" said Xavier
X-Man opened the hatch, and pointed in. The Predator peeked its bowl head in and looked around, making a clicking noise with its throat that was higher pitched than the parents.
"Go on in." Xavier said
He put his hand on the young Predator's green and mottled back and gently helped him inside.

hardkoreUSMC
Vice Captain


hardkoreUSMC
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Wed Mar 07, 2007 6:04 am


CHAPTER TWO
"There's one thing that the little Predators will definitely do, and that's run up to you when you have chocolate. They LOVE chocolate."
Lance Corporal Xavier


Wow! What a neat ooman thing! Ki'vik'na thought to himself as the ooman let him get inside of the giant...whatever it was. It was large, metal; sand colored, had a large barrel at the top part, and with a stinger mounted near the hatch. He crawled in and sat in a large chair. It was somewhat cramped inside. The ooman sat next to him. Inside there was a giant shaft with all sorts of equipment around it. Behind him in a small alcove area were several golden colored cylinders, some with the ooman letters "H-E" while others had "A-P" or "S-M". The ooman pressed a button near the shaft, and a hole opened up after a cover piece moved. I guess those things go inside! The ooman started babbling in his language about the thing. After about 5 minutes the ooman got out and motioned for Ki'vik'na to get out too.

The two sat on the turret for a while. X-Man was showing the little Predator some of the things that he had on his person. His pocket watch he'd gotten from his great-great grandfather. Silver pocket watch with a 19K gold Marine emblem on the front. When opened up it revealed a color photo of the old Marine in his enlisted dress blue uniform with his sergeant major chevrons and rockers on his sleeves and all twelve of his medals pinned on his chest.
"Hey fella, what's your name?" asked X-Man
The Predator looked at him perplexed. Then as X-Man pointed to himself and said "Xavier" the Predator tilted his head back and said "Ki'vik'na."
"keevicknah?" X-Man tried
The Predator smiled and then pointed at him and tried to pronounce his name "xsssaavverrr."
"That's close enough big guy." Said X-Man smiling to himself. This was certainly an enjoyable experience with a species that was renown for killing humans and taking their skulls as trophies.
Then the Predator looked at one female younger Predator that was walking about, he appeared to have spoken her name. "De'tin'de"
The slightly larger Predator, who had the same tone of skin, looked at the male sitting on the tank. Hmmm...maybe them two are siblings? The female walked over to the two that were sitting on the turret. She hopped on the tank effortlessly and sat down next to the male. Yeah, they are siblings. They look very much the same.
"Umm...your name is daytinday?" he said
The female's eyes widened. Obviously she caught the name part of it. Her white eyes with reddish irises looking into his. She spoke her weird language at him. The brother pointed at him, and then looked at his sister and said his name. "Exxsssavvveeerr."
Xavier then pointed at him and said his name, "kivicknah." They both looked at him and smiled. He smiled to himself. He just can't stop making friends.



Ten minutes later, Highway walked back to the squad. Ke'sar'di went to her chambers with her mate Na'rik-de and their three remaining children, Ki'vik'na, De'tin'de, and Warkha.
"Li!" shouted Highway
"Yes sir!" replied Lance Corporal Li
"Get the CO on the COM, I need to talk to the brass!"
"Aye aye sir!" responded Li
The establishment of communications between the squad and the base took only minutes. From there, Highway awaited a reply from the Divisions commanding officer, Lieutenant General Maynard. His image appeared on the portable Comm. unit.
"Sir Gunny Highway here to report situation."

"Talk to me gunny." Said Maynard

"Sir the Preds in the area are being harassed by another alien species that has technology equal to ours." Said Highway

"Go on."

"Well sir, they've taken casualties; both adult and children alike. They are willing to co-operate with us."

"What's your plan?" asked Maynard

" Sir I proposed that we take the children back to the base, and establish a field post in their village." Highway addressed

"I have no problem with that, but how do you plan on going about taking them back? There is almost no room in those tanks for a large number of "yautja."

"Sir could you authorize some grav jets, or maybe some APCs?" requested Highway

"Sure, but if any come up missing, it's your a** and your career!" stated Maynard

"Yes sir, loud and clear." Replied Highway

"I do not approve of the field post, gunny, you have permission to occupy the region, except no structures shall be raised. Reason being supply and expense." Said Maynard

"Yes sir." Sounded Highway

"As for re-enforcement, you really don't need that much. I can allow your Battalion CO a couple more companies of infantry support, on top of the space support and forces that already occupy the region. You call if you need help, ya hear?"

"Sir yes sir. Highway out."

Highway grabbed the COM for the fortress on the planet. There was a second of static hiss, and then a voice came online "Six Big Bear do you copy over!"
"This is big bear, do you read Mother Cave? Over!" Highways name was Big Bear.
"This is Mother Cave, go on Big Bear."

"Request immediate dispatch of HCACs to co-ordinates Niner Five Six by Zero Zero Two Over!" Said Highway

"Co-ordinates Niner Five Six by Zero Zero Two confirmed, anything else over!" Said the Operator

"Also some Verti-bird jet for some escort, just in case over!"

"What is the cargo for the HCACs over?" Asked the Operator

"The cargo is a load of Predator children. Consider cargo Security VIP Level 3 over." Said Highway

"Roger that, ETA 5 minutes over!"

"Outstanding, Big Bear Out!"

When Highway ended the transmission, he looked up and saw some Predator children huddling down behind him in curiosity to what he was doing. Their little yellow and red eyes looking young and innocent. Like they still had much to offer in their life. One of them sat down cross-legged Indian style right in front of him. It had whitish skin or a very pale brown.
"What's your name?" Highway asked in a "hey there little feller!" tone
It looked at his dog tags, which glistened silver, clinging and chiming in the wind with his rank, name, serial number, branch, and date of birth. The young Predator continued to look at them. The others were slowly starting to go back to whatever it was that they were doing, all except him. He looked at Highway eyes with a "can I see it" impression. His eyes were a black pupil with gold irises and a white everywhere else.
"Oh...you want to see this?" Highway said as he held the tags up.
"You can have it, it's alright!" he took off the dog tags and gave them to the youngling. It took the tags, looked at him, and smiled by raising the top two mandibles. After that he ran off. That cute little booger!




Na'rik-de has always in years past never like oomans. He practically despises them for the way they advance their technology so fast, and how their culture has no honor or meaning of morals. Once when he was young his father brought home three ooman trophies. Na'rik-de, ever since then aspired to be just like his father in the sense of hating oomans as well as desiring to kill them for sport. The only reason he was co-operating with them now was the fact that his children were in danger and this was one positive way to ensure their safety.
"Mother, father, look what the ooman gave me!" said Warkha running inside happily showing off his new souvenir.
"What is it?" asked De'tin'de curiously
"Yeah, what is it?" followed the older Ki'vik'na
"It's some sort of name thing that those oomans wear." Answered Ke'sar'di
"Can you read it?" asked Warkha
"I'm not sure, let me see it!" Ke'sar'di examined it close.
She couldn't make out a single damn word.
"What does that mean, Marine?" asked De'tin'de
Na'rik-de roared, "The ones that fought and killed our warriors in days past!"
"Really!?" asked a startled Ki'vik'na
"Yes, our clans clash with theirs, we take their skulls as trophies and they kill us in return."
"Why do you hunt oomans?" asked the youngest Warkha
"Because it is simply been that way for generations, that's why!" roared Na'rik-de. "We hunt them simply because we can and they won't stop us!"
"What he's trying to say is, is that our race enjoys challenges, especially ones that shoot back." Explained Ke'sar'di
"Well if you don't like them then why are you letting them help us?" questioned De'tin'de
"It's more along the lines of we have no choice." Said Na'rik-de
"Father, are we going to die from those things that keep on attacking?" asked Warkha
"Yeah, is our kind going to come to help?" questioned Ki'vik'na
"Well my younglings, we are going to have to trust a species that would gladly like to see us die for the years that we've hunted them." Announced Na'rik-de in a morbid tone.
"But these are different, they didn't kill you when they easily could have." Stated Ke'sar'di
"That's why we've decided to trust them."


"Damn those birds are late...again!" Highway swore. He was waiting in a clearing a kilometer from the village. They were twenty minutes late. Finally six small figures came into view from the air. The HCACs. They hovered around and all landed next to each other about ten yards apart. The gunny signaled for them to cut their engines off. Each pair of thrusters all went silent, the turbines glowing red hot giving a hiss as cool air hit them. A minute later the verti-birds landed behind the HCACs.
"This way gentlemen." Signaled Highway. The pilots of the HCACs got out. The door gunners and pilots of the verti-birds stayed back to watch the expensive equipment.
"Gentlemen, do not be afraid of the aliens that I'm about to show you." Explained Highway as the pilots all followed the gunny in their brown jumpsuits, " Also, just remember to keep your hands to yourself, and don't attempt to start any conversations, just allow me to do the talking."
The group walked to the middle of the village and immediately the gunny could see the pilots were not expecting this. Creatures that were very tall, green, yellow, brown, or white skinned, very muscular, dark ropelike hair, and the most shocking feature to a bunch of flyboys out of the academy, the face with four mandibles; each carrying a tusk that covered a pink mouth with small but sharp looking teeth. Two of the pilots were looking pale.
"Boys I'd like to introduce you to the VIPs that you will be lifting outta here!"
A taller, familiar looking one walked up to Highway. It was Na'rik-de. He and his 'family' were following him.
"Gunneee, are these your warriors?" he asked
"Yes, these are the pilots that will fly your youth to our fortress."
"When do you want to leave?" asked Ke'sar'di
"They're ready to go whenever. Whenever y'all are ready."
"Sir, each of our birds can hold eight passengers." Confirmed a pilot.
"Ok then, Narikday, I need you to group all of your youth up so that a proper roster can be made so that they will be accounted for."
The younglings all grouped together in a giant crowd of forty. Male and female alike, all varying in color, shape, and age. All sixty-two adults waited and stood on the outside of the crowd. Ke'sar'di stood front and center of the crowd. Highway walked over and motioned for all the younglings to sit. Ke'sar'di spoke in Predator tongue and all the children sat and hushed.
"Okay...my name (he points to himself) is Highway." He stated to the crowd. "Kesardee, tell them I'll split them evenly to the pilots. Tell them to give them their name that way he can account for them later."
She spoke in their native language. The children seemed to understand as they nodded when the instructions were given. At the end, she looked back at Highway.
"Okay, tell them that they will be safe where they are going, and that everything will be okay when they are there."
She nodded, and continued to speak. The youths' eyes were all fixed on her. Gold, red, some green were staring at her, and an occasional quick glance or two at him. When she finished she looked back at Highway. "We ready." She said

"Here we go." Highway said to himself as the groups were separated. The pilots each had a small group of younglings and were writing names down for the roll call. After about ten minutes the youth were loaded on board. They all looked around at the HCAC, which probably was a marvelous thing to be in right now. The verti-birds lifted off vertically and then waited for the HCACs. One by one the turbines ignited, dust fluttered and wafted hard. Each HCAC lifted slowly off the ground, and then awaited the others. Eventually all six were airborne, and the verti-birds assumed an escort position with the group. They all flew off toward the south where the fortress rested.
PostPosted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 11:31 pm


This is pretty cool. I quite like military sci-fi, I started out writing that stuff. Big fan of Dan Abnett, he writes for Games Workshop.

Problem with any military story is, the details of military systems and paraphenalia can complicate the story. For example, at the start where you're explaining about the garrison, there are quite a few long sentences explaining what the various abbreviations mean, what the significance and role of particular vehicles are, so on and so forth. It might be better to describe such things when they are encountered in the story, to try and dilute the overpowering weight of information the reader has to take on! Try to trust people to get what you're saying without mentioning every last detail, if you can see how that works.

Its also a bit confusing blending ideas from several sources, but it actually works pretty well here. You made the predators cute!

Well thought I'd drop you some feedback, since you commented all of mine so far. Cheers.

Waco475


hardkoreUSMC
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 8:07 am


Waco475
This is pretty cool. I quite like military sci-fi, I started out writing that stuff. Big fan of Dan Abnett, he writes for Games Workshop.

Problem with any military story is, the details of military systems and paraphenalia can complicate the story. For example, at the start where you're explaining about the garrison, there are quite a few long sentences explaining what the various abbreviations mean, what the significance and role of particular vehicles are, so on and so forth. It might be better to describe such things when they are encountered in the story, to try and dilute the overpowering weight of information the reader has to take on! Try to trust people to get what you're saying without mentioning every last detail, if you can see how that works.

Its also a bit confusing blending ideas from several sources, but it actually works pretty well here. You made the predators cute!

Well thought I'd drop you some feedback, since you commented all of mine so far. Cheers.


I wrote this roughly 4 years ago in high school xp and I haven't modified it ONE bit since then.

I'm more a lyrix righter! razz
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