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we will float like angels
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 Posted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 8:48 pm
I dont have a title for it yet, but if you have one in mind feel free to post it.
She slits her wrists
When she is feeling down
She slits her wrists
When no one is around
She slits her wrists
Though she is not high
She slits her wrists
Though no one knows why
She slits her wrists
So she feels comfortable
She slits her wrists
No one thinks she's loveable
He loves her
All hands down
He loves her
Though in her sorrow he drowns
He loves her
There is no deny
He loves her
Until he may die
He loves her
His love is reliable
He loves her
Their love is viable
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Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 11:21 pm
Nothing bad about this I can say. it reminds me of me and meh Kiefer - kun! heart whee 4laugh 3nodding Good job kid.
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Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 5:26 pm
I like it alot! Very nice! Only suggestion the 'thoughs' bugged me a bit, but nothing major! and thats just a personal preference.
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Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2007 2:52 pm
i think it was good! i liked it!
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Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 2:48 pm
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Posted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 5:33 am
I think it was okay...good job 3nodding
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